On 4/21/06, Denis Grelich <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Have some issues as well, there's a list: > all the - should be --- without spaces, or at least -- > "" should not be used. `` '' > > 1.3 Wmii [...] > not to exceed 10K lines of code > small 'k' > > 2.2 Configuration and Installation > and gentoo should already have good > 'Gentoo' capitalized > > 3.2 Focus > In X11, exactly one client gets the users input. > user's > > 4.1 First steps > the first term is the name of the tag of the window. Then, after the vertical > line (the pipe symbol) > wmii shows the title of the window. > there is no pipe symbol anymore? > > 4.2 Using Columns > columns not capitalized > > What about adding '?' to the rethorical questions > > 4.6 How do I close a window > Well, first of all every X-Client should have > X-client > > Thus, the Window Manager has to provide > window manager > > 4.7 How do I start programs > You may start programs out of a xterm. > an xterm > > 5.3 The glue that puts it all together - 9p > is it 9p or 9P? (in the whole paragraph) > > 5.4 Tools > This section gives an little overview of the tools that wmii, but for more > detailed explana- > tions you should read the man page of each tool, that comes with wmii. > something is broken here. (btw: it's "a little overview") > > 6.2 actions > capitalized: Actions > > 6.4 Changing the looks > you might know from html. > HTML > second is the main colour of bars borders, > bar borders > 3d-effects > 3D > > 6.5 Filling the status-bar > how the bar will be painted(appearance), > add a space: painted (appearance) > monitoring remaining battery, temperature,\dots > add a space: temperature, \dots > to save us from typing a lot by issueing > issuing > > Then, in typography, the - is never used. In the most Chapter and section > headings you would rather use --- (without spaces between --- and the words > left and right). If you really don't like this, at least use --. (Note: in > german, there is no ---, only -- is used, but /with/ spaces). Also, " is > never used as well. Rather use `` and '' instead. > > Greetings, > Denis > > > > _______________________________________________ > [email protected] mailing list > http://wmii.de/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/wmii > > >
Denis and Ross,
Thanks to for the time spent reading the guide, and write down the corrections,
I've already added most of them. But as neither Steffen or /me are
native english
speakers (even we do our best) I prefered to send you the modifications so you
can check them before pushing.
btw, I've also commented the \usepackage{html}, so there's no
dependency of latex2html by default, if someone wants to generate
html, then just comment it out. This way just by issuing ``make'' on
doc/ you only need to have latex installed.
Because i think it was bad that not having latex2html mean that you
couldn't read the guide in any of the formats.
Regards,
PD: btw, hope i've not included more erratas ... (with the ``corrections'')
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