Hi  Bruce

here are my comments on this version

1. There is a potential problem with the scope/Introduction of the document, since it only covers trust between the browser and the subscriber, when what really matters is trust between the RP and the subscriber. How is this gap to be covered?

2. Section 2.1. 3rd para insert may -> The root store provide "may" require the root CA.... Rationale. If the root store provider can verify a CA simply because it has been accepted by another root store provider, as per the second paragraph, then conversely, it may not require it to be annually audited but may remove it only when the other root store provider removes it.

3. Section 2.3 insert may -> The subscriber may identify...
Rationale. This more accurately reflects the current situation today, doesn't it?

4. Section 3.2.3. A third party RA is not identified in a CA certificate as anything, is it?. Remove "as an issuing CA" as this implies it is identified as something else.

5. What is the relevance of section 3.3.1? If a third party is subcontracted to a party to do work on its behalf, then the party is ultimately responsible for this and there is no need to mention it.

6. Section 5.2. Non-unique names. It is unclear whether non-unique names refers to Internet wide unique names, or only to CA wide unique names. Be explicit.

regards

David

On 11/10/2013 13:02, Bruce Morton wrote:
The Trust Model draft has been updated.

Bruce.

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Filename:        draft-barreira-trustmodel
Revision:        00
Title:           Trust models of the Web PKI
Creation date:   2013-10-09
Group:           Individual Submission
Number of pages: 9
URL:             
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-barreira-trustmodel-00.txt
Status:          http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-barreira-trustmodel
Htmlized:        http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-barreira-trustmodel-00


Abstract:
    This is one of a set of documents to define the operation of the Web
    PKI.  It describes the currently deployed Web PKI trust.




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