Finally catching up on email backlog ;) Overall, It'd be nice to have a single-section introduction - Section 1 goes on and on and it lays out very differently from others. Going through I found a bunch of small grammar and spelling and such, which I felt worse about keeping track of when I got to the significantly in-progress of the last sections.
- Probably want to expand the first instance of CA, PKIX, CSC, etc - "PKIX models has imporant" - misspelling - "but this is does not" - typo - "because they no further use" - typo - Operational Certificate States has some formatting issues - 2.1.1. Status Model" - has an extraneous " (double quote) - REVOKED" as does revoked - "certificate was legitimately issued" - missing a period at the end of the sentence - "thus a client that" - Thus should be capitalized - OCSP Stapling has been support in Windows since (specifically) Windows Server 2008 / Vista. -tom _______________________________________________ wpkops mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/wpkops
