Re: Chopping bloom

[John M. Bennett]

Glad you like - I'm fiddling around with a classical Arabic style form - in this case, each line sort of stands alone (at least that's the idea in part)

john

At 08:47 AM 3/3/2006, you wrote:

This is an especially wonderful title, and I love what it is doing. Gracias, Dr. B - Sheila E

"John M. Bennett" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

Chopping bloom

 

 

chopping humming gashing smelling doping

 

door lean  ,your growl nest burnt

 

cheap an chump an chip an champ

 

so you spread the sandwich eh ?

 

 

hand of gateway like yr axe so doping

 

 

yr fingers eaten brain the gateway

 

stab smoke stink birds use mess

 

chubby wood you fondled in yr neck

 

hand an ditch an pot an soak an bloom

John M. Bennett

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Dr. John M. Bennett     
Curator, Avant Writing Collection
Rare Books & Manuscripts Library
The Ohio State University Libraries
1858 Neil Av Mall
Columbus, OH 43210 USA

(614) 292-3029
[EMAIL PROTECTED]
www.johnmbennett.net
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