It's a shame that such a beautiful and delicate poem is ruined by the choice of words. I find 'dump' intolerable vulgar. In my opinion such a word shouldn't be used in a love poem. I love sand castles though!

xoxox

On Wed, 2 Aug 2006, Charles Baldwin wrote:

I like the phrase  "i'll dump a shell on your chest." It seems a sort of
crustacean battle? Like you're building sand castles on each other?

(yes, a cap, I know)

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gotta love it!

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