I'm not criticizing your poetry, Steve. This one just seemed a little less
generous than you normally are. I still love your poetry. I very much liked
your poem for Diane Burns, what I could read of it (my French is not that great
anymore. It never was, really.) Anyway, I look forward to seeing and hearing
you again soon. Regards, Tom Savage
"steve d. dalachinsky" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: tom why have you been
criticizing my poesie these past 2 weeks
On Thu, 22 Feb 2007 10:31:59 -0800 Thomas savage <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> writes:
Hi Steve, I take it you don't believe the old rock refrain: "I am you and
you are me. And we are all together." It's from an old Beatles tune, if I
remember correctly. Regards, Tom Savage
"steve d. dalachinsky" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>
> minority / sonority / seniority
>
> nor am i son
> nor am i place
> nor am i resistance
> nor am i song
> nor am i stone
> nor exotic embroidery
> nor are you mine
> nor i yours
> nor is it mine
> nor try as i can i it's
> possession being what it is
>
> nor are we in unison
> nor are we partisans
> nor am i wood
> nor sure space placed here
> nor snug as a bug in a ............ rug
> nor intersecting planks
> nor integrated circuits
> nor disenchanted ventilation
> nor can i try to be anything other than.....
> la question
> rim shot / nim rod
> knowhatwithin
> yours hear / dawn's kin
>
> nor am i was what
> forthwith
> untied
> titled wrong
> here forth spilt juice
> packaged deal
> or celebrated canary freefalled
> & tremulous bowel.
>
> written paris @ sept lizards 12/22/06 ernest dawkins /katy roberts duo
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