Design crituque wise:

Make it center rather than oddly positioned.
make the grey text darker, remember people of the older generation are more likely to be reading it and thus may have eyes that are statring to fail. is that blue on red? thats really wrong.. stick with a light light pink or a white font.

On 14 Oct 2005, at 19:46, <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

I have been a fly on the wall for some time in this group and I was really hoping to get a bit of feedback on a site I am almost finished with. Copy
will change and possibly some site design before I deliver the final
version.

What I am hoping for is a bit of a report card- what was done well and where did I fail miserably. (BTW one of the pages does not validate right now, the client just had us insert some new links that need to be reformatted)

www.mcguireomaha.com

Thanks in advance for any help or suggestions you can give as well as any positive feedback. I've just taken a bit of a beating from the client ;-)

Joe



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