On 3/7/07, Dylan Lindgren <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Hi guys,

...

If I could get you guys to have a look at the website
www.lagunadesigns.com.au it would be greatly appreciated. I am going to list
this on Google AdWords under a few keywords once I'm completely happy with
it. I tried to go for a web 2.0 style look.

Thanks for your help,
Dylan Lindgren
Laguna Designs
[EMAIL PROTECTED]
www.lagunadesigns.com.au

The design, markup etc. is great. I just have a couple suggestions on the copy.

I wouldn't say "accessible price," but rather "affordable price."

In the features table, you have:

# Graphically appealing
# Highly customizable
# User friendly
# Standards based

repeated for all site plans. I wouldn't repeat these things for every
single plan, but rather have  a way of saying, outside the table, that
all site plans are w,x,y,z. Then it would be easier for people to see
which features are different between the site plans.

Finally, it seems like some of the links in the portfolio are out of date.

Hope it helps.

--
Christian Montoya
christianmontoya.net .. designtocss.com


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