Hi Marvin, Sorry, I missed the last round of reviews of your site - I'm guessing you've posted it here on WSG previously?
There are a few things that I would do differently, but it's a fairly simple site so they're not major issues. If the design was more complex with more content and interaction then perhaps you might need to change things like the navigation, header hierarchy visual priority - otherwise I think it's fine. If I were you I would stick to HTML instead of going with XHTML as you seem to struggle with it; it still doesn't validate. What do you hope to achieve with this site? I can't tell if you're trying to push phone ordering or get people to your shop. You seem to be promoting the phone number (and for the record I dislike 1800-CALL-ME style phone numbers; takes longer to dial) more than the physical address of the shop. Unless your target customer group are already aware of you one of the biggest questions new users to the site will want answered is if you're relevant to them and can provide them service. What area do you cover with phone orders? Do you want to cover all of Australia? Do you get orders from the other side of the country? What's the purpose of your favourite links pages? I suggest you install a web analytics package to see if anyone actually visits those pages. You might want to consider linking to relevant recipes from your produce page next to primary ingredients used in those recipes. Hope that's helpful. If you want more help, you can contact me off-list. I'm available for hire :) Nathanael Boehm Freelance web user interaction designer UX · IxD · UI design · Prototyping · HTML · CSS · JS · Usability · Accessibility · Social media · Tech training Imagine Innovation · KATA Professional · UXnet Canberra · OpenAustralia · BarCampCanberra Australian Social Innovation eXchange (ASIX) Canberra www.purecaffeine.com <http://www.purecaffeine.com/about/> Canberra, Australia 0409 288 464 On Thu, Nov 12, 2009 at 9:19 AM, Marvin Hunkin <startrekc...@gmail.com>wrote: > hi. > well made quite a few changes. > and vallidated all pages. > and vallidates. > then got a sighted person to review my site. > now. > here'sthe current version and hopefully the final version. > now from a accessibility view point, and a layout and content viewpoint. > what do you think? > any feedback, good, bad, ugly. > but please be civil. > cheers Marvin. > > http://www.raulferrer.com/joe/html/ > > > > > > ******************************************************************* > List Guidelines: http://webstandardsgroup.org/mail/guidelines.cfm > Unsubscribe: http://webstandardsgroup.org/join/unsubscribe.cfm > Help: memberh...@webstandardsgroup.org > ******************************************************************* > > ******************************************************************* List Guidelines: http://webstandardsgroup.org/mail/guidelines.cfm Unsubscribe: http://webstandardsgroup.org/join/unsubscribe.cfm Help: memberh...@webstandardsgroup.org *******************************************************************