CVSROOT:        /web/www
Module name:    www
Changes by:     Jeanne Rasata <jrasata> 10/09/26 12:33:31

Modified files:
        music          : free-software-song.html 

Log message:
        made edits to the lyrics, song title, and the recording information, 
and corrected a typo

CVSWeb URLs:
http://web.cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/www/music/free-software-song.html?cvsroot=www&r1=1.52&r2=1.53

Patches:
Index: free-software-song.html
===================================================================
RCS file: /web/www/www/music/free-software-song.html,v
retrieving revision 1.52
retrieving revision 1.53
diff -u -b -r1.52 -r1.53
--- free-software-song.html     17 Sep 2010 22:35:31 -0000      1.52
+++ free-software-song.html     26 Sep 2010 12:33:25 -0000      1.53
@@ -8,26 +8,32 @@
 
 <div class="lyrics">
 <p>
-[To the melody of <a href="free-software-song.html#SadiMoma" 
name="REFSadiMoma">Sadi Moma</a>:] 
+The lyrics of the "Free Software Song" are sung to the melody of the
+Bulgarian fold song <a href="free-software-song.html#SadiMoma"
+                      name="REFSadiMoma">"Sadi moma bela loza"</a>:] 
 </p>
 
      <p>Join us now and share the software;<br />
-     You'll be free, <a 
href="http://stallman.org/articles/on-hacking.html";>hackers</a>, you'll be 
free.<br />
-     <em>x2</em></p>
+     You'll be
+     free, <a href="http://stallman.org/articles/on-hacking.html";>hackers</a>,
+     you'll be free.<br />
+     Join us now and share the software;<br />
+     You'll be free, hackers, you'll be free.<br />
 
-     <p>Hoarders may get piles of money,<br />
+     <p>Hoarders can get piles of money,<br />
      That is true, hackers, that is true.<br />
      But they cannot help their neighbors;<br />
      That's not good, hackers, that's not good.</p>
 
      <p>When we have enough free software<br />
      At our call, hackers, at our call,<br />
-     We'll throw out those dirty licenses<br />
+     We'll kick out those dirty licenses<br />
      Ever more, hackers, ever more.</p>
 
      <p>Join us now and share the software;<br />
      You'll be free, hackers, you'll be free.<br />
-     <em>x2</em></p>
+     Join us now and share the software;<br />
+     You'll be free, hackers, you'll be free.<br />
 
 </div>
 
@@ -43,12 +49,12 @@
 song, also available in <a href="/music/free-software-song.ogg">Ogg
 Vorbis format</a>.</li>
 
-<li>Another <a href="./FreeSWSong.ogg">good performance
-(ogg)</a> in a more proper Bulgarian style.</li>
+<li><a href="./FreeSWSong.ogg">A recording (.ogg)</a> of the piece
+  accompanied by Bulgarian instruments played in traditional style.</li>
 
 <li>A <a
 
href="http://audio-video.gnu.org/video/stallman_free_software_song_320x240.ogv";>video
-of rms performing the song (ogg)</a>, released under GFDLv1.3+ by the
+of RMS performing the song (ogg)</a>, released under GFDLv1.3+ by the
 videographer, Julian Coccia.</li>
 
 </ul>
@@ -60,7 +66,7 @@
 <li><a
 href="http://audio-video.gnu.org/audio/Fenster-Free-Software-Song.ogg";>Another
 song</a>, inspired by this one but mostly different, sung by the band
-Fenster (4.5M)</li>
+Fenster (4.5M).</li>
 
 <li>A rhythmic version of free software song in <a
 href="/music/free-software-song-rhythmic.ogg">Ogg Vorbis</a> format by
@@ -86,7 +92,7 @@
   <a href="http://www.phoeniximago.com/2010/01/the-free-software-song/";>Robert
     Kay</a>, released under 
   <a href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/legalcode";>
-    CC-BY-NC-SA</a></li>
+    CC-BY-NC-SA</a>.</li>
 
 </ul>
 
@@ -105,10 +111,10 @@
 
 </div>
 
-<h3 id="SadiMoma">Sadi Moma</h3>
+<h3 id="SadiMoma">"Sadi moma bela loza"</h3>
 
 <p>
-Here is a description of the tune of Sadi Moma, a Bulgarian dance
+Here is a description of the tune of "Sadi moma bela loza", a Bulgarian dance
 tune, in an ad-hoc form of notation using letters for notes.  A dash
 means the previous note continues.  There are seven beats per measure,
 thus seven characters in each group.
@@ -159,7 +165,7 @@
 <p>
 Updated:
 <!-- timestamp start -->
-$Date: 2010/09/17 22:35:31 $
+$Date: 2010/09/26 12:33:25 $
 <!-- timestamp end -->
 </p>
 

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