Thanks for the comment.
We added a few more examples, and also tightened up this wording.
Please see the latest draft at
http://www.w3.org/MarkUp/2008/ED-xhtml-access-20081023/
for details.
Best wishes,
Steven Pemberton
On Wed, 06 Aug 2008 09:13:52 +0200, <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Comment from the i18n review of:
http://www.w3.org/MarkUp/2008/WD-xhtml-access-20080526/
Comment 5
At
http://www.w3.org/International/reviews/0806-xhtml-access/Overview.html
Editorial/substantive: E
Tracked by: RI
Location in reviewed document:
General
Comment:
Phrasing such as 'assigning an accessibility mapping' or 'the document
focus or an inspection focus' are not very clear, and there is no
clarification or links to definitions. A few more examples, and
explanations of how they affect the user experience (not just code
snippets), would also be welcome.