>>> +Xenstore the backend information is presented there. <qemu> is built >> That looks to be missing an verb, no it has a verb, something is off with >> that. >> >> XenStore presents the backend information there? > No, qemu is presenting the information in Xenstore.
"Xenstore" is not the start of the sentence - it follows on from the previous line, but even as a native English speaker it took me a while to figure out. A comma should be present (i.e. "As $FOO, $BAR relating to $FOO"), and it would aid clarity. +As each qemu instance owns a path (named "<qemu>" from now on) in +Xenstore, the backend information is presented there. <qemu> is built ~Andrew _______________________________________________ Xen-devel mailing list Xen-devel@lists.xen.org http://lists.xen.org/xen-devel
