On 03/10/2019, 21:59, "Andrew Cooper" <andrew.coop...@citrix.com> wrote:
Put together an introduction page for the Sphinx/RST docs, along with a
glossary which will accumulate over time.
Signed-off-by: Andrew Cooper <andrew.coop...@citrix.com>
Reviewed-by: Lars Kurth <lars.ku...@citrix.com>
There were a few minor improvements which could be made, I am listing these
below, but none are show-stoppers.
+Xen is an open source, bare metal hypervisor. It runs as the most
privileged
+piece of software, and shares the resources of the hardware between virtual
Maybe better: s/software/software on the system/ or s/software/software on the
host/
+machines.
+ hardware domain
+ A :term:`domain`, commonly dom0, which shares responsibility with Xen
+ about the system as a whole.
+
+ By default it gets all devices, including all disks and network
cards, so
+ is responsible for multiplexing guest I/O
This is a little unclear: in particular the 1st paragraph. Earlier you talk
about hardware
domain="responsible for hardware and marshalling guest I/O", which is clearer.
Maybe:
A :term:`domain`, commonly dom0, which hosts all devices, including disks
and network cards and is responsible for multiplexing guest I/O
is better
Regards
Lars
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