Thanks for the feedbacks. Reply below. Kristian Larsson <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> Having only read through half of the manual, these > are my current nitpickings... ;) > > In the definitions section.. > EGP is not only a term covering, basically only, > BGP but it is also a protocol of it's own. Would > be nice if that was reflected in the manual. EGP (the protocol) is considered obsolete, and probably the set of people who know about it will know the difference :) Anyway, I just added a footnote to clarify that. > You write 'an user' throughout the paper while I > believe that 'a user' would be the correct > article. I bring forth evidence A ;) > http://www.googlefight.com/index.php?lang=en_GB&word1=%22a+user%22&word2=%22an+user%22 > For those seeking an explanation I found the > following two pages excellent: > http://en.allexperts.com/q/English-Second-Language-1815/vs.htm > http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/esl/esliart.html > Now given that English is not my native > tongue I might be wrong.. I will leave this to the native English speakers :) > In the OSPF section I would like to change the > router-id part, as it's not an IPv4 address, it's > rather just an 4 byte ID usually displayed in > dotted quad notation. > "The smallest IP address of an interface belonging > to the router is a good choice." > An address belonging to a loopback is probably a > better choice if available and I think 'lowest' > instead of 'smallest' is more correct, no? Technically, I think you are correct about the 4 byte ID. My preference for the smallest vs lowest would be to say "the numerically smallest IP address". In any case I will leave the OSPF editing to the OSPF folks. > page 57, source->vif section: > "The value mist be" should probably be "The value > must be", same thing in vif section. Both fixed. > page 61 > "packets and then forwards then from one" ==> > "packets and then forwards _them_ from one" Fixed. Thanks, Pavlin > I'll continue reading when I get home :) > > Kind regards, > Kristian. > > > -- > Kristian Larsson KLL-RIPE > Network Engineer / Internet Core Tele2 / SWIPnet [AS1257] > +46 704 910401 [EMAIL PROTECTED] > > _______________________________________________ > Xorp-hackers mailing list > [email protected] > http://mailman.ICSI.Berkeley.EDU/mailman/listinfo/xorp-hackers _______________________________________________ Xorp-hackers mailing list [email protected] http://mailman.ICSI.Berkeley.EDU/mailman/listinfo/xorp-hackers
