Hey Jack!
Yes, if making it a bit more concise doesn't make it harder to follow,
I'm encouraging you to do that.
Cheers,
Pasi
On 22/08/12 04:53, Jack Fromm wrote:
Okay, I looked over your rewrite to get a feel for what you wanted.
It seems like you want to make this new version much more concise than
the old one by eliminating a lot of the step-by-step details on how to
accomplish things. Is that accurate?
I've been working on a few more of the subpages under section 10.
Mostly I've just tried to make the formatting consistent with the
other sections but I've also been checking to make sure the references
to fields, choices and buttons match the Quantal wording wherever that
has changed. So it still might be too wordy if you really are trying
to tighten things up. Let me know if that's the case.
Thanks for you patience.
Jack
On 08/21/2012 05:56 PM, Pasi Lallinaho wrote:
I see you copied the old text over - great! I've rewritten one of the
subpages as an additional example for you (and others) on how to get
started with the actual rewrite.
Again, please don't hesitate to be in touch.
Cheers,
Pasi
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