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Status: New => Invalid
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Title:
Grammar misses in manual “Networking API v2.0 (CURRENT)”
Status in neutron:
Invalid
Bug description:
The manual link is:
http://developer.openstack.org/api-ref-networking-v2.html
1.The description in manual is as below：
"Use virtual networking services among devices that are managed by the
OpenStack Compute service....Enables users to associate IP address blocks and
other network configuration settings with an OpenStack Networking network. "
Because "Use" is used by the first sentence and it is imperative
sentence, "Enables" in the last sentence is not correct. I think it
should be "Enable".
2.The description in same location as above is as below：
"The Networking (neutron) API v2.0 combines the API v1.1 functionality with
some essential Internet Protocol Address Management (IPAM) functionality."
Because "some" is used and i think "some" here does not mean
"certain", the last "functionality" should be "functionalities".
3.The description in same location as above is as below:
"Enables users to associate IP address blocks and other network configuration
settings with an OpenStack Networking network. You can choose a specific IP
address from the block or let OpenStack Networking choose the first available
IP address. "
Acorrding to the context, the "block" in the last sentence should be
"blocks".
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