Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/256062 Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/horizon/commit/?id=37285b8569bca13f4087b0dff996a9a4b342cf02 Submitter: Jenkins Branch: master
commit 37285b8569bca13f4087b0dff996a9a4b342cf02 Author: Gudrun Wolfgram <[email protected]> Date: Thu Dec 10 12:42:54 2015 -0600 Improve readability of Horizon Packaging doc Include various changes for readability. Make bulleted list parallel. Shorten long sentences. In some cases include articles and clarify subject in sentences. Spell out "for example." Eliminate redundant words / phrases. Per Matthias's recommendation, shuffle order of topics and create two sections to focus first on general packaging principles, and then Horizon specifics. Change-Id: Ic864dd926d723c6dc9749249655ae2e7d08ed225 Co-Authored-By: Matthias Runge <[email protected]> Closes-Bug: #1516986 ** Changed in: horizon Status: In Progress => Fix Released -- You received this bug notification because you are a member of Yahoo! Engineering Team, which is subscribed to OpenStack Dashboard (Horizon). https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/1516986 Title: Grammar/ phrasing cleanup on packaging docs Status in OpenStack Dashboard (Horizon): Fix Released Bug description: There were a few outstanding nits on the phrasing used in the packaging doc: doc/source/topics/packaging.rst The relevant review is here: https://review.openstack.org/#/c/228423/ There should be addressed with a second pass over the document. To manage notifications about this bug go to: https://bugs.launchpad.net/horizon/+bug/1516986/+subscriptions -- Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~yahoo-eng-team Post to : [email protected] Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~yahoo-eng-team More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp
