Public bug reported: - [x] This doc is inaccurate in this way: Wrong use of the word "comprise" - [ ] This is a doc addition request. - [x] I have a fix to the document that I can paste below including example: input and output.
"Nova is comprised of multiple server processes" "to comprise" means "to be composed of" so the above phrase, would read as "Nova is composed of of multiple server processes." The correct phrased would either be: "Nova comprises multiple server processes" or "Nova is composed of multiple server processes" ----------------------------------- Release: on 2018-10-30 10:13:24 SHA: 6e4ab9714cc0ca147f61997aa7b68f88185ade5c Source: https://opendev.org/openstack/nova/src/doc/source/user/architecture.rst URL: https://docs.openstack.org/nova/latest/user/architecture.html ** Affects: nova Importance: Undecided Status: New ** Tags: doc -- You received this bug notification because you are a member of Yahoo! Engineering Team, which is subscribed to OpenStack Compute (nova). https://bugs.launchpad.net/bugs/1831309 Title: Nova System Architecture in nova Status in OpenStack Compute (nova): New Bug description: - [x] This doc is inaccurate in this way: Wrong use of the word "comprise" - [ ] This is a doc addition request. - [x] I have a fix to the document that I can paste below including example: input and output. "Nova is comprised of multiple server processes" "to comprise" means "to be composed of" so the above phrase, would read as "Nova is composed of of multiple server processes." The correct phrased would either be: "Nova comprises multiple server processes" or "Nova is composed of multiple server processes" ----------------------------------- Release: on 2018-10-30 10:13:24 SHA: 6e4ab9714cc0ca147f61997aa7b68f88185ade5c Source: https://opendev.org/openstack/nova/src/doc/source/user/architecture.rst URL: https://docs.openstack.org/nova/latest/user/architecture.html To manage notifications about this bug go to: https://bugs.launchpad.net/nova/+bug/1831309/+subscriptions -- Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~yahoo-eng-team Post to : [email protected] Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~yahoo-eng-team More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp
