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Daniel Templeton commented on YARN-6742:
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Thanks for the patch. Overall a great set of language edits. Here are my
additional fixes:
* "merely meaning that the process are running" => "merely meaning that the
processes are running"
* "register a web URL and an IPC address. But it is not sufficient for our
purposes since it does not allow" => "register a web URL and an IPC address. It
is not sufficient for our purposes, however, as it does not allow"
* "to be registered —such as" => "to be registered—such as"
* "able to register certificates and other public security information" =>
"able to register certificates, and other public security information"
* "There has no attempt to restrict read access" => "There will be no attempt
to restrict read access"
* "security restriction (this is why" => "security restriction. (This is why"
* "all other accounts, and anonymous access is read-only." => "all other
accounts and anonymous access are read-only."
* {quote}* The permissions are similarly restricted for `/users`, and
`/services/`
* installations may extend or change these system accounts.{quote} => {quote}*
The permissions are similarly restricted for `/users`. `/services/`
installations may extend or change these system accounts.{quote}
* "add extra `digest:` ACL tokens" => "add extra `digest`: ACL tokens," <--
Note the trailing comma.
* "The agents use two-way HTTPS authentication-—if the AM fails" => "The agents
use two-way HTTPS authentication. If the AM fails"
> Minor mistakes in "The YARN Service Registry" docs
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>
> Key: YARN-6742
> URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/YARN-6742
> Project: Hadoop YARN
> Issue Type: Bug
> Components: documentation
> Affects Versions: 3.0.0-alpha3
> Reporter: Yeliang Cang
> Assignee: Yeliang Cang
> Priority: Trivial
> Attachments: YARN-6742-001.patch, YARN-6742-002.patch,
> YARN-6742-003.patch
>
>
> There are minor mistakes in The YARN Service Registry docs.
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