On 2012/11/28 12:33:03, teknico wrote: > Thanks for these docs, they're much useful.
> I made quite a few small adjustments to the text flow and markup, so instead of > wasting your time and mine by making lots of small comments inline, I just > created a new branch and made all changes there. I did not reflow paragraphs > even when lines got too long, to avoid obscuring the changes in the diff. > Note that some additions and deletions of blank lines are needed to make the > document compile to HTML correctly. > I also added the document to the index.rst file, so that it appears in the > generated output. > I'm sorry for the extensive rework: I do believe it significantly improves > overall readability, however. > Please find the changes at lp:~teknico/juju-gui/framework-docs . Thank you! I merged your changes to this branch and will re-propose if there is another reviewer. https://codereview.appspot.com/6858085/ -- https://code.launchpad.net/~bcsaller/juju-gui/framework-docs/+merge/136578 Your team Juju GUI Hackers is requested to review the proposed merge of lp:~bcsaller/juju-gui/framework-docs into lp:juju-gui. -- Mailing list: https://launchpad.net/~yellow Post to : [email protected] Unsubscribe : https://launchpad.net/~yellow More help : https://help.launchpad.net/ListHelp
