On 2/11/20 11:16 AM, [email protected] wrote: > Minor fixes: > > - punctuation > - capitalization > - markup > - wording > > Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <[email protected]>
Wrong ML. We have a [email protected] with patchwork support. - armin > > --- > > diff --git > a/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-development-environment.xml > b/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-development-environment.xml > index 2f1bd1610..dd12814fc 100644 > --- > a/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-development-environment.xml > +++ > b/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-development-environment.xml > @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ > <title>The Development Host</title> > > <para> > - A development host or > + A <firstterm>development host</firstterm> or > <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_REF_URL;#hardware-build-system-term'>build > host</ulink> > is key to using the Yocto Project. > Because the goal of the Yocto Project is to develop images or > @@ -389,7 +389,7 @@ > In summary, a single point of entry > exists for changes into a "master" or development branch of the > Git repository, which is controlled by the project’s maintainer. > - And, a set of developers exist who independently develop, test, and > + In addition, a set of developers exist who independently develop, > test, and > submit changes to "contrib" areas for the maintainer to examine. > The maintainer then chooses which changes are going to become a > permanent part of the project. > diff --git a/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-yp-intro.xml > b/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-yp-intro.xml > index dbf62cc16..87b7e40b3 100644 > --- a/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-yp-intro.xml > +++ b/documentation/overview-manual/overview-manual-yp-intro.xml > @@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ > Additionally, if you have used the Yocto Project to > create an image or application and you find yourself > not able to support it, commercial Linux vendors such > - as Wind River, Mentor Graphics, Timesys, and ENEA > could > + as Wind River, Mentor Graphics, Timesys, and Enea > could > take it and provide ongoing support. > These vendors have offerings that are built using > the Yocto Project. > @@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ > not part of a standard toolchain, you can easily > customize that toolchain through specification of > platform-specific tuning parameters. > - And, should you need to use a third-party toolchain, > + In addition, should you need to use a third-party > toolchain, > mechanisms built into the Yocto Project allow for > that. > </para></listitem> > <listitem><para> > @@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ > <emphasis>Initial Build Times Can be > Significant:</emphasis> > Long initial build times are unfortunately > unavoidable > due to the large number of packages initially built > - from scratch for a fully functioning Linux system. > + from scratch for a fully-functioning Linux system. > Once that initial build is completed, however, the > shared-state (sstate) cache mechanism Yocto Project > uses keeps the system from rebuilding packages that > @@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ > To illustrate how layers are used to keep things modular, > consider > machine customizations. > These types of customizations typically reside in a special > layer, > - rather than a general layer, called a BSP Layer. > + rather than a general layer, called a <firstterm>BSP > layer</firstterm>. > Furthermore, the machine customizations should be isolated from > recipes and Metadata that support a new GUI environment, > for example. > @@ -852,9 +852,9 @@ > </para> > > <para> > - This section provides an introduction to the choices or > + This section provides an introduction to the choices of > development methods you have when setting up your Build Host. > - Depending on the your particular workflow preference and the > + Depending on your particular workflow preference and the > type of operating system your Build Host runs, several choices > exist that allow you to use the Yocto Project. > <note> > @@ -1013,7 +1013,7 @@ > </para> > > <para> > - Poky has a regular, well established, six-month release cycle > + Poky has a regular, well-established, six-month release cycle > under its own version. > Major releases occur at the same time major releases (point > releases) occur for the Yocto Project, which are typically in the > @@ -1104,7 +1104,7 @@ > select (DEB, RPM, or IPK) is used to roll up the > software. > </para></listitem> > <listitem><para> > - Different QA and sanity checks run throughout entire > + Different QA and sanity checks run throughout the entire > build process. > </para></listitem> > <listitem><para> > @@ -1145,7 +1145,7 @@ > user-defined variables, and hardware configuration > information. > These files tell the > - <ulink > url='&YOCTO_DOCS_REF_URL;#build-system-term'>Open-Embedded build > system</ulink> > + <ulink > url='&YOCTO_DOCS_REF_URL;#build-system-term'>OpenEmbedded build system</ulink> > what to build and what to put into the image to support a > particular platform. > </para></listitem> > @@ -1177,7 +1177,7 @@ > <para>For more detailed information on layers, see the > "<ulink > url='&YOCTO_DOCS_DEV_URL;#understanding-and-creating-layers'>Understanding > and Creating Layers</ulink>" > section in the Yocto Project Development Tasks Manual. > - For a discussion specifically on BSP Layers, see the > + For a discussion specifically on BSP layers, see the > "<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_BSP_URL;#bsp-layers'>BSP > Layers</ulink>" > section in the Yocto Project Board Support Packages (BSP) > Developer's Guide. > @@ -1234,7 +1234,7 @@ > developed by the OpenEmbedded community that has been > pared down into a smaller, core set of continuously > validated recipes. > - The result is a tightly controlled and quality-assured > + The result is a tightly-controlled and quality-assured > core set of recipes.</para> > > <para>You can see the Metadata in the > @@ -1303,7 +1303,7 @@ > patches to apply. > Recipes describe dependencies for libraries or for other > recipes as well as configuration and compilation options. > - Related recipes are consolidated into a layer. > + Related recipes are typically consolidated into a layer. > </para></listitem> > </itemizedlist> > </para> > > >
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