[yocto] [PATCH] Documentation: Some trivial tweaks to Quick Start Guide

[Robert P. J. Day]

Nothing major, just some simple cleanup in the QS Guide.

Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpj...@crashcourse.ca>

---

diff --git a/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml 
b/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml
index 0f2ecf4..b3e7595 100644
--- a/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml
+++ b/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@

 <section id='fake-title'>
     <title>Yocto Project Quick Start</title>
-    <para>Copyright &copy; 2010-2011 Linux Foundation</para>
+    <para>Copyright &copy; 2010-2012 Linux Foundation</para>
 </section>

 <section id='welcome'>
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
         rich Yocto Project Development Community into which you can tap.
     </para>
     <para>
-        Finally, you might find the Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) for the 
Yocto Project
+        Finally, you can find the Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) for the 
Yocto Project
         at <ulink url='https://wiki.yoctoproject.org/wiki/FAQ'>Yocto Project 
FAQ</ulink> and
         the FAQ appendix located in
         <ulink 
url='http://www.yoctoproject.org/docs/latest/poky-ref-manual/poky-ref-manual.html'>
@@ -470,8 +470,8 @@
         </para>

         <itemizedlist>
-            <listitem><para>Install the stand-alone Yocto toolchain 
tarball.</para></listitem>
-            <listitem><para>Download the pre-built image that will boot with 
QEMU.
+            <listitem><para>Install the appropriate stand-alone Yocto 
toolchain tarball.</para></listitem>
+            <listitem><para>Download the pre-built kernel image that will boot 
with QEMU.
                 You need to be sure to get the QEMU image that matches your 
target machine’s
                 architecture (e.g. x86, ARM, etc.).</para></listitem>
             <listitem><para>Download the filesystem image for your target 
machine's architecture.
@@ -487,7 +487,7 @@
                 script and support files, from the appropriate directory under
                 <ulink 
url='http://downloads.yoctoproject.org/releases/yocto/yocto-1.1/toolchain/'></ulink>.
                 Toolchains are available for 32-bit and 64-bit development 
systems from the
-                <filename>i686</filename> and <filename>x86_64</filename> 
directories, respectively.
+                <filename>i686</filename> and <filename>x86-64</filename> 
directories, respectively.
                 Each type of development system supports five target 
architectures.
                 The tarball files are named such that a string representing 
the host system appears
                 first in the filename and then is immediately followed by a 
string representing
@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@
             </para>

             <literallayout class='monospaced'>
-     
poky-eglibc&lt;<emphasis>host_system</emphasis>&gt;-&lt;<emphasis>arch</emphasis>&gt;-toolchain-gmae-&lt;<emphasis>release</emphasis>&gt;.tar.bz2
+     
poky-eglibc-&lt;<emphasis>host_system</emphasis>&gt;-&lt;<emphasis>arch</emphasis>&gt;-toolchain-gmae-&lt;<emphasis>release</emphasis>&gt;.tar.bz2

      Where:
          &lt;<emphasis>host_system</emphasis>&gt; is a string representing 
your development system:
@@ -548,7 +548,7 @@
                 Be sure to use the kernel that matches the architecture you 
want to simulate.
                 Download areas exist for the five supported machine 
architectures:
                 <filename>qemuarm</filename>, <filename>qemumips</filename>, 
<filename>qemuppc</filename>,
-                <filename>qemux86</filename>, and 
<filename>qemux86_64</filename>.
+                <filename>qemux86</filename>, and 
<filename>qemux86-64</filename>.
             </para>

             <para>
@@ -639,13 +639,13 @@
             </para>

             <para>
-                Continuing with the example, the following two commands setup 
the emulation
+                Continuing with the example, the following two commands set up 
the emulation
                 environment and launch QEMU.
                 This example assumes the root filesystem tarball has been 
downloaded and expanded, and
                 that the kernel and filesystem are for a 32-bit target 
architecture.
                 <literallayout class='monospaced'>
      $ source /opt/poky/1.1/environment-setup-i686-poky-linux
-     $ runqemu qemux86 bzImage-3.0-qemux86-1.1.bin \
+     $ runqemu qemux86 bzImage-qemux86.bin \
      core-image-sato-qemux86.ext3
                 </literallayout>
             </para>

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                        http://crashcourse.ca

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