Dear sandeep,
I think this has too many cliche words in it, ie:
gutwrenching
unrequited (passion)
burning (passion)
You start thinking of Mills & Boon or women's magazine stories....
sorry, it just set my teeth on edge.
Can you find another way of expressing these emotions?
Jane
sandeep pendse <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
sandeep pendse <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
the colours
questionable
questioning
purple and red
gut wrenching
passions - unrequited
and passions - burning
colours
purple and red
pining for pastels cool
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