for vidyanjali, with love
there is so much in the news
the world is whirling
it never stopped, really
more deaths caused by bombs
quakes, tsunamis and
that five sided building
a building? how can it cause havoc?
even the stubborn leaves
have decided to meet mother
and when the temperature
dipped below zero
i folded my shorts
..............and all summer dreams
but these timorous thoughts
over a dilettante's misdemeanor
have perturbed this greenhorn
............more
ps: did mention am a greenhorn...the earlier formatting went haywire...hope this works
On 11/20/05, jane bhandari <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>
> hallo...
> she just asked you to take a look.
> If you don't want to, don't.
> She writes poetry too, you know.
> border are porous, yes, and sometimes it is hard to tell where poetry ends
> and prose begins.
>
> sorry to be testy, but this rumbles on, can we close the matter now.
>
> Jane
>
> prerna rungta <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> wats wrong with you...... i m just curious to know wat
> on earth is so damn annoying abt the lady's
> request.... if u dnt want to give ur
> opinion...dont.... where is the need for all this
> verbiage......
>
> --- Abhishek Hazra wrote:
>
> >
> > >> I thought this group was about poetry? <<
> > so the "A humble request" of the subject line is
> > to be read as a plea to resist from such
> > transgressions?
> >
> > hmm...'regulation' at borders that
> > are inescapably porous?
> > what is more desirable? an endless taxonomy of
> > mailing-lists? each devoted to its respective
> > "content-deity" but which essentially remain devoid
> > of content...
> > Pardon me if I am over-reacting
> > Cheers
> > :-)
> >
> >
> >
> > Albert Krishna Ali wrote:
> > I thought this group was about poetry?
> >
> > On 11/16/05, vidyanjali_1980
> > wrote:
> > >
> > >
> > > Hi all,
> > >
> > > I have put up a short story in my blog. it is my
> > first ever. The text is a
> > > bit long so dint want to put it up here. But
> > would request ,Zest members to
> > > kindly review it for me. Since it is my first
> > attempt ever to write one i
> > > think valuable crtiicism would help me to
> > improve. here is the link to it:
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