Hello!

>   Done. Probably the current explanation about the installation under
> UNIX gives the user a fright. Any improvement is welcome.

1) GNU is not UNIX :-)
2) Please don't use emotional words. It "may be" dangerous or may not,
dependent on the OS.

Ok to apply the patch below?

Regards,
Pavel Roskin

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diff -u -r1.18 tutorial.texi
--- tutorial.texi       2000/08/10 02:23:04     1.18
+++ tutorial.texi       2000/08/10 21:35:52
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@
 on the floppy.
 @end quotation
 
-On a UNIX like operating system, that is done with the following
+On a UNIX-like operating system, that is done with the following
 commands:
 
 @example
@@ -305,8 +305,8 @@
 real task is done by the grub shell @command{grub} (@pxref{Invoking the
 grub shell}). Therefore, you may run @command{grub} directly to install
 GRUB, without using @command{grub-install}. Don't do that, however,
-unless you are very familiar with the internal of GRUB. Installing a
-boot loader under UNIX is so dangerous.
+unless you are very familiar with the internals of GRUB. Installing a
+boot loader on a running OS may be dangerous.
 
 
 @node Booting
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