Dear Martin, On 17/10/08 00:38, W. Martin Borgert wrote: > I will put the current text into the release notes subversion > archive in the next 12 hours. You could then post diffs to the > debian-doc mailing list or to the BTS. Is this OK for you?
you can find in attachment the patch to apply to manuals/branches/release-notes/lenny/en/upgrading.dbk rev.5421 in order to include the corrections proposed by Andrei Popescu.
--- upgrading.dbk 2008-10-18 16:15:13.000000000 +0200 +++ upgrading.dbk_new 2008-10-18 16:30:41.000000000 +0200 @@ -6585,15 +6585,6 @@ <section id="how-to-recover"> <title>How to recover from the problem after the upgrade</title> - <note> - <title>Preliminary remark</title> - <para> - Once you have successfully applied one of the solutions below, - you should consider applying one of the two appoaches above to - get definitely rid of this issue. - </para> - </note> - <section id="solution1"> <title>Solution 1</title> <para> @@ -6644,30 +6635,9 @@ </listitem> <listitem> <para> - If this solution worked. Login to your system, make a - backup of the <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> - file. Then generate a new - <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> by issuing with - root privileges the command <command>update-grub</command> - </para> - </listitem> - <listitem> - <para> - Edit <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> and make - sure all occurences of - <literal>hd<replaceable>X</replaceable></literal> were - replaced by - <literal>sd<replaceable>X</replaceable></literal>. There - is nothing wrong with the lines similar to: - - <screen>root (hd0,0)</screen> - - just leave it as it is. - </para> - </listitem> - <listitem> - <para> - Reboot your system, it should reboot correctly. + Now that your system has booted, you need to fix this issue permanently. + Jump to the section "How to avoid the problem before upgrading" and apply + one of the two proposed procedures. </para> </listitem> </orderedlist> @@ -6721,45 +6691,12 @@ which partition to mount). </para> - <orderedlist> - <listitem> - <para> - Make a backup of the - <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> file. Then - generate a new <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> by - issuing with root privileges the command - <command>update-grub</command> - </para> - </listitem> - <listitem> - <para> - Edit <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> and make - sure all occurences of - <literal>hd<replaceable>X</replaceable></literal> - (<replaceable>X</replaceable> is a letter among - <literal>a</literal>, <literal>b</literal>, - <literal>c</literal> or <literal>d</literal> depending of - your system) were replaced by - <literal>sd<replaceable>X</replaceable></literal>. There - is nothing wrong with the lines similar to: - - <screen>root (hd0,0)</screen> - - just leave it as it is. - </para> - </listitem> - <listitem> - <para> - Type <literal>exit</literal> to leave the rescue shell - </para> - </listitem> - <listitem> - <para> - Select <literal>reboot</literal>, it should reboot - correctly. - </para> - </listitem> - </orderedlist> + <para> + Jump to the section "How to avoid the problem before upgrading" and apply one + of the two proposed procedures to fix the problem parmanently. Then type 'exit' + to leave the rescue shell and select 'reboot' for rebooting the system as + usual. (Don't forget to remove the bootable media) + </para> </section> <section id="solution3"> @@ -6830,33 +6767,8 @@ </listitem> <listitem> <para> - If it boots correctly, login, make a backup of the - <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> file. Then - generate a new <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> by - issuing with root privileges the command - <command>update-grub</command> - </para> - </listitem> - <listitem> - <para> - Edit <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> and make - sure all occurences of - <literal>hd<replaceable>X</replaceable></literal> - (<replaceable>X</replaceable> is a letter among - <literal>a</literal>, <literal>b</literal>, - <literal>c</literal> or <literal>d</literal> depending of - your system) were replaced by - <literal>sd<replaceable>X</replaceable></literal>. There - is nothing wrong with the lines similar to: - - <screen>root (hd0,0)</screen> - - just leave it as it is. - </para> - </listitem> - <listitem> - <para> - Reboot your system, it should reboot correctly. + When it has booted, apply one of the two proposed procedures under "How to + avoid the problem before upgrading" to fix the problem permanently. </para> </listitem> </orderedlist>