Dear Martin,

On 17/10/08 00:38, W. Martin Borgert wrote:
> I will put the current text into the release notes subversion
> archive in the next 12 hours. You could then post diffs to the
> debian-doc mailing list or to the BTS. Is this OK for you?

you can find in attachment the patch to apply to manuals/branches/release-notes/lenny/en/upgrading.dbk rev.5421 in order to include the corrections proposed by Andrei Popescu.






--- upgrading.dbk       2008-10-18 16:15:13.000000000 +0200
+++ upgrading.dbk_new   2008-10-18 16:30:41.000000000 +0200
@@ -6585,15 +6585,6 @@
   <section id="how-to-recover">
     <title>How to recover from the problem after the 
upgrade</title>
 
-    <note>
-      <title>Preliminary remark</title>
-      <para>
-       Once you have successfully applied one of the solutions below,
-       you should consider applying one of the two appoaches above to
-       get definitely rid of this issue.
-    </para>
-    </note>
-
     <section id="solution1">
       <title>Solution 1</title>
       <para>
@@ -6644,30 +6635,9 @@
        </listitem>
        <listitem>
          <para>
-           If this solution worked. Login to your system, make a
-           backup of the <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename>
-           file. Then generate a new
-           <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> by issuing with
-           root privileges the command 
<command>update-grub</command>
-         </para>
-       </listitem>
-       <listitem>
-         <para>
-           Edit <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> and make
-           sure all occurences of
-           
<literal>hd<replaceable>X</replaceable></literal> were
-           replaced by
-           
<literal>sd<replaceable>X</replaceable></literal>. There
-           is nothing wrong with the lines similar to:
-
-           <screen>root            (hd0,0)</screen>
-
-           just leave it as it is.
-         </para>
-       </listitem>
-       <listitem>
-         <para>
-           Reboot your system, it should reboot correctly.
+           Now that your system has booted, you need to fix this issue 
permanently.
+           Jump to the section "How to avoid the problem before upgrading" and 
apply
+           one of the two proposed procedures.
          </para>
        </listitem>
       </orderedlist>
@@ -6721,45 +6691,12 @@
        which partition to mount).
       </para>
 
-      <orderedlist>
-       <listitem>
-         <para>
-           Make a backup of the
-           <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> file. Then
-           generate a new <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> 
by
-           issuing with root privileges the command
-           <command>update-grub</command>
-         </para>
-       </listitem>
-       <listitem>
-         <para>
-           Edit <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> and make
-           sure all occurences of
-           
<literal>hd<replaceable>X</replaceable></literal>
-           (<replaceable>X</replaceable> is a letter among
-           <literal>a</literal>, <literal>b</literal>,
-           <literal>c</literal> or 
<literal>d</literal> depending of
-           your system) were replaced by
-           
<literal>sd<replaceable>X</replaceable></literal>. There
-           is nothing wrong with the lines similar to:
-
-           <screen>root            (hd0,0)</screen>
-
-           just leave it as it is.
-         </para>
-       </listitem>
-       <listitem>
-         <para>
-           Type <literal>exit</literal> to leave the rescue shell
-         </para>
-       </listitem>
-       <listitem>
-         <para>
-           Select <literal>reboot</literal>, it should reboot
-           correctly.
-         </para>
-       </listitem>
-      </orderedlist>
+      <para>
+       Jump to the section "How to avoid the problem before upgrading" and 
apply one
+       of the two proposed procedures to fix the problem parmanently. Then 
type 'exit'
+       to leave the rescue shell and select 'reboot' for rebooting the system 
as
+       usual. (Don't forget to remove the bootable media)
+      </para>
     </section>
 
     <section id="solution3">
@@ -6830,33 +6767,8 @@
        </listitem>
        <listitem>
          <para>
-           If it boots correctly, login, make a backup of the
-           <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> file. Then
-           generate a new <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> 
by
-           issuing with root privileges the command
-           <command>update-grub</command>
-         </para>
-       </listitem>
-       <listitem>
-         <para>
-           Edit <filename>/boot/grub/menu.lst</filename> and make
-           sure all occurences of
-           
<literal>hd<replaceable>X</replaceable></literal>
-           (<replaceable>X</replaceable> is a letter among
-           <literal>a</literal>, <literal>b</literal>,
-           <literal>c</literal> or 
<literal>d</literal> depending of
-           your system) were replaced by
-           
<literal>sd<replaceable>X</replaceable></literal>. There
-           is nothing wrong with the lines similar to:
-
-           <screen>root            (hd0,0)</screen>
-
-           just leave it as it is.
-         </para>
-       </listitem>
-       <listitem>
-         <para>
-           Reboot your system, it should reboot correctly.
+           When it has booted, apply one of the two proposed procedures under 
"How to
+           avoid the problem before upgrading" to fix the problem permanently.
          </para>
        </listitem>
       </orderedlist>

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