On 8/20/07, Matt Hogstrom <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

> Apache Geronimo Version 2.0.1

I don't like Version uppercased - Apache Geronimo 2.0.1 is fine.

> released by Apache Software Foundation
>
> date/time/location—The Apache Software Foundation (ASF) announced
> today the release of Apache Geronimo Version 2.0.1

Again Version uppercased.

> represents the latest open source Java Enterprise Edition 5.0

Once "open source" is lowercased...

> and capabilities to a fully compliant and certified Java Enterprise
> Edition container

Add 5.0 to the JEE.

> first Open Source Application Server to provide two certified JAX-WS

...and another is uppercased. Make it consistent.

> Web Services implementations: Apache Axis2 and Apache CXF. This
> capability further highlights the flexibility of Apache Geronimo
> which also provides two certified Web Container implementations:

Why is Web Container uppercased?

> Geronimo 2.0

Apache Geronimo 2.0.1

> includes support for the Enterprise JavaBeans (EJB) 3.0 specification

I'd change it to "Enterprise JavaBeans 3.0 (EJB3) specification".

> - EJB 3.0 persistence

Although it's correct, I'd use JPA rather than the above term.

> - A programming model that uses annotations to express developer
> defaults in the source code

Would "Configuration by Exception" make it any better? It's a well
recognized term so we could leverage it.

Jacek

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