Mostly reads good to me, only minor niggle to me is: Then once the vote passed, svn move to release
which I think might be grammatically better: “Once the vote has passed, svn move to the release tree ” +1.5 non-binding :) From: Hervé BOUTEMY <herve.bout...@free.fr> <herve.bout...@free.fr> Reply: Maven Developers List <dev@maven.apache.org> <dev@maven.apache.org> Date: 27 March 2021 at 2:19:48 PM To: Maven Developers List <dev@maven.apache.org> <dev@maven.apache.org> Subject: Re: [VOTE] Release Apache Maven version 3.8.0 first pass of documentation improvement done in github.com/apache/maven-site/commit/ec73b445adc7012e1384cf1b89af3f0a6f5eee17 please all review and see if anything you read may be mis-interpreted when reading fast
