Eh, vitriol has a long half-life.  Anyway, about content...

"Issue free copies of the software to students with their course" -- I
might suggest "Provide" rather than "Issue", because for some reason I read
that as "Issue-free" on the first pass.

"book, with Writer all are simple tasks" -- suggest "book are all simple
tasks with Writer".

"straight forward" -> "straightforward"

"Exploit decorative treasures, such as special shapes such as banners,
stars and captions, from the Gallery" -> "Exploit decorative treasures,
including special shapes such as banners, stars and captions, from the
Gallery"

"Create 3D objects with A simple click" -> "Create 3D objects with a simple
click"

"Available free form:" -> "Available free from:"

I see your disclaimer box for commercial products.  I honestly don't know
if that obviates the need for TMs here and there.  Anyone else know?

Don



On Fri, Aug 30, 2013 at 2:23 PM, Drew Jensen <drewjensen.in...@gmail.com>wrote:

> Ok - I've been hearing about this for 9 years and there has never been a
> problem - I was a bit curt in my reply.
>
>
> On Fri, Aug 30, 2013 at 2:22 PM, Donald Whytock <dwhyt...@apache.org>
> wrote:
>
> > No, but Apache cares about legal issues, and therefore might not want
> > someone else's trademarks (however valid or frivolous) infringed upon in
> > the context of presenting Apache's own valid ones.
> >
> > Don
> >
> >
> > On Fri, Aug 30, 2013 at 2:08 PM, Drew Jensen <drewjensen.in...@gmail.com
> > >wrote:
> >
> > > Personally, I don't care about that other entity.
> > >
> > >
> > > On Fri, Aug 30, 2013 at 1:53 PM, David Gerard <dger...@gmail.com>
> wrote:
> > >
> > > > On 30 August 2013 18:53, David Gerard <dger...@gmail.com> wrote:
> > > >
> > > > > Nice one! Though "OpenOffice" on its own is someone else's
> trademark,
> > > > > so care should be taken in abusing it.
> > > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > I mean, *not* to abuse it. Sorry!
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > - d.
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