I am thrilled that you like it John …but
it’s hardly an improvement – let’s settle on calling it a
variation J
Allan
From: owner-FLUXLIST@scribble.com [mailto:owner-FLUXLIST@scribble.com] On Behalf Of John M. Bennett
Sent: Friday, March 03, 2006 10:01
AM
To: FLUXLIST@scribble.com
Subject: RE: FLUXLIST: Bug you vs.
Bug and Hog
Wow - this is the poem within the poem, and, I gotta say, quite an
improvement on the original!!
John
At 09:47 AM 3/3/2006, you wrote:
Hog you
hog an knife and dink and bug an
rattled hog an you a bug I thought
sinking gnat ah templar gluts an
useless wills an wares ,dub bent
threat feeler coke your counter bug useless
gold dog dingle soaking in your sunk coke
hog lens enable shod hat note
sourly nipped gut ,hashed wit lice
threat you pled you snake you cheap you
Allan Revich
Après
J. M. Bennett
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Behalf Of John M. Bennett
Sent: Thursday, March 02, 2006
8:06 AM
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Subject: FLUXLIST: Bug you
Bug you
bug an knife and dink and hog an
rattled bog an you a bag I thought
sinking gnat ah temple gluts an
useless walls an wars ,bod dent
throat feeler cake your counter hog useless
clod god dangle soaking in your sink cake
bug lens enable shod bat tone
sorely napped cut ,bashed with ice
throat you plod you shake you heap you
John M. Bennett
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43210 USA
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