> Maybe a fossilized gnu, Linux penguin, or BSD demon would be more
> appropriate ;).

Or a petrified window? I operate linux, bsd and windows boxes and they are all 
the same to me.
 
Thanks for the correction. I'll leave the text aside for a few weeks and then 
have a fresh read to fix errors and problems. In the meantime all suggestions 
like the below are welcome.
 
Paul


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From: fossil-users-boun...@lists.fossil-scm.org on behalf of Stephan Beal
Sent: Wed 5/6/2009 7:58 AM
To: fossil-users@lists.fossil-scm.org
Subject: Re: [fossil-users] Documentation for TH1



On Tue, May 5, 2009 at 11:25 PM, D. Richard Hipp <d...@hwaci.com> wrote:
> I really, really like the logo and want to add it to the website.

Maybe a fossilized gnu, Linux penguin, or BSD demon would be more
appropriate ;).


@Paul: Wow! i think you've just doubled the amount of docs fossil has.
A tiny recommendation for Page 4:

----
Words cannot start with one of the TH special characters { } [ ] \ ; and ". Note
that a single quote ' is not a special character in TH. To use one of
these characters to
start a word it must be escaped, which is discussed further later on.
----

i would swap sentences 2 and 3 because #3 _seems_ to refer to the
single quote, whereas i believe it's really referring to the chars
listed in the first sentence. Swapping them would clarify that
ambiguity.

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----- stephan beal
http://wanderinghorse.net/home/stephan/ 
<http://wanderinghorse.net/home/stephan/> 
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