https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=203340

            Bug ID: 203340
           Summary: Minor Clarity Improvement to Section 17.14.3.1
           Product: Documentation
           Version: Latest
          Hardware: Any
                OS: Any
            Status: New
          Severity: Affects Only Me
          Priority: ---
         Component: Documentation
          Assignee: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org
          Reporter: mwalker1...@gmail.com

Created attachment 161390
  --> https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/attachment.cgi?id=161390&action=edit
I hope I did this properly.

An extremely minor clarity quibble, regarding the phrasing of one sentence of
documentation found in section 17.14.3.1: Recovering from the Split-brain
Condition.

The original is: "The administrator must decide which node has more important
changes or merge them manually."
I would rather state the sentence as: "The administrator must either decide
which node has more important changes, or perform the merge manually."

The attached .patch file contains the change as stated here, assuming that I
generated it correctly.

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