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Craig L Russell commented on JDO-666:
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It's great to have this available. Just a few comments (yes, I know that I can 
make these changes; I just wanted to record them before I forget them).

It was hard to find the quick reference on the web site. I'd think that this 
deserves its own listing in the left nav bar under JDOQL heading.

The sample code could use a different font to better distinguish it from the 
text. Maybe courier new bold?

Keyword has a bad widow with to, unique, variables, where on the following 
column

Probably should include the version number. This document is for 3.1 since it 
includes the List.get(int) method. We might want to publish a 3.0 version.

The title "Result Cl asses and Aliases" has an extraneous blank in front of 
asses.

The operator "boolean logical AND" might better be called "bitwise logical 
AND"; similarly "boolean logical OR" -> "bitwise logical OR"

Brilliant: "all people with ick in their names" ;-)

> Provide quick reference to JDOQL as PDF download
> ------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: JDO-666
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/JDO-666
>             Project: JDO
>          Issue Type: New Feature
>          Components: site and infrastructure
>            Reporter: Andy Jefferson
>            Assignee: Andy Jefferson
>
> As a convenient reference we ought to provide a short PDF download of JDOQL 
> key concepts, available from the website

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