Attached should be a patch to add ncurses5-config to the Ncurses program list, and several grammar/spelling fixes.
Index: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/inetutils.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/inetutils.xml  (revision 8370)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/inetutils.xml  (working copy)
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
         <term><parameter>--disable-ifconfig</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
           <para>This option prevents Inetutils from installing the
-          <command>ifconfig</command>, which can be used to configure network
+          <command>ifconfig</command> program, which can be used to configure 
network
           interfaces. LFS uses <command>ip</command> from IPRoute2 to perform
           this task.</para>
         </listitem>
Index: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/udev.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/udev.xml       (revision 8370)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/udev.xml       (working copy)
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@
       <varlistentry id="path_id">
         <term><command>path_id</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Provide the shortest possible unique hardware path to a
+          <para>Provides the shortest possible unique hardware path to a
           device</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-udev path_id">
             <primary sortas="b-path_id">path_id</primary>
@@ -365,7 +365,7 @@
       <varlistentry id="etc-udev">
         <term><filename class="directory">/etc/udev</filename></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Contains Udev configuation files,
+          <para>Contains Udev configuration files,
           device permissions, and rules for device naming</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-udev etc-udev">
             <primary sortas="e-/etc/udev">/etc/udev</primary>
Index: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/glibc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/glibc.xml      (revision 8370)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/glibc.xml      (working copy)
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
         scripts/test-installation.pl</userinput></screen>
 
     <para>The <command>ldd</command> shell script contains Bash-specific
-    syntax. Change it's default program interpreter to 
<command>/bin/bash</command>
+    syntax. Change its default program interpreter to 
<command>/bin/bash</command>
     in case another <command>/bin/sh</command> is installed as described in the
     <ulink url="&blfs-root;view/svn/postlfs/shells.html">Shells</ulink>
     chapter of the BLFS book:</para>
Index: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/ncurses.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/ncurses.xml    (revision 8370)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/ncurses.xml    (working copy)
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@
 
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>captoinfo (link to tic), clear, infocmp, infotocap (link to tic),
-        reset (link to tset), tack, tic, toe, tput, and tset</seg>
+        ncurses5-config, reset (link to tset), tack, tic, toe, tput, and 
tset</seg>
         <seg>libcursesw.{a,so} (symlink and linker script to 
libncursesw.{a,so}),
         libformw.{a,so}, libmenuw.{a,so}, libncurses++w.a, libncursesw.{a,so},
         libpanelw.{a,so} and their non-wide-character counterparts without "w"
@@ -218,6 +218,16 @@
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
 
+      <varlistentry id="ncurses5-config">
+        <term><command>ncurses5-config</command></term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>Provides configuration information for ncurses</para>
+          <indexterm zone="ch-system-ncurses ncurses5-config">
+            <primary sortas="b-ncurses5-config">ncurses5-config</primary>
+          </indexterm>
+        </listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+
       <varlistentry id="reset">
         <term><command>reset</command></term>
         <listitem>
Index: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/gcc.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/gcc.xml        (revision 8370)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/gcc.xml        (working copy)
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>c++, cc (link to gcc), cpp, g++, gcc, gccbug, and gcov</seg>
         <seg>libgcc.a, libgcc_eh.a, libgcc_s.so, libmudflap.{a,so},
-        libssp.{a,so}libstdc++.{a,so}, and libsupc++.a</seg>
+        libssp.{a,so}, libstdc++.{a,so}, and libsupc++.a</seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>
 
Index: trunk/BOOK/chapter06/man-db.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/chapter06/man-db.xml     (revision 8370)
+++ trunk/BOOK/chapter06/man-db.xml     (working copy)
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
     to install them yourself after finishing LFS if you wish to do so.</para>
 
     <para>Finally, patch the sources to fix output errors if the man page is
-    prematurely aborted by pressing the 'q' key.</para>
+    prematurely aborted by pressing the 'q' key:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>patch -Np1 -i ../&man-db-fixes-patch;</userinput></screen>
 
@@ -341,7 +341,7 @@
       <segtitle>Installed programs</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
-        <seg>accessdb, apropos, catman, convert-mans,lexgrog, man, mandb,
+        <seg>accessdb, apropos, catman, convert-mans, lexgrog, man, mandb,
         manpath, whatis, and zsoelim</seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>
Index: trunk/BOOK/appendices/dependencies.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/BOOK/appendices/dependencies.xml      (revision 8370)
+++ trunk/BOOK/appendices/dependencies.xml      (working copy)
@@ -737,7 +737,7 @@
 
         <seglistitem>
          <seg>Bash, Berkeley DB, Bison, Coreutils, Flex, GCC, Glibc, Make,
-         and Linux-Libc-Headers</seg>
+         and Linux API Headers</seg>
         </seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
 
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