Dear Jon,

If we corrected each other's mistakes in English, we'd be here all
day.

In fact, ironically enough, your "sentence" correcting Antonio's
English is itself incorrect:

1) One should not normally begin a sentence with "But", since "but"
is a word used to co-ordinate two parts of a sentence.

2) What you wrote after "But" is not a sentence. The word "If"
introduces a subordinate clause, but you have not supplied a main
verb later on to make a complete sentence. By putting a full stop
(or "period" in American usage) after "another language)", you have
ended your sentence prematurely. Instead you should have put a
comma.

3) Throughout that passage there is a distinct absence of commas,
which are used to separate subordinate clauses from the rest of the
sentence.

By the way, as far as spelling is concerned, in your other message
sent today you meant "abrasive", not "abasive".

I'm sorry to be somewhat abrasive, but you did say you preferred to
be corrected.

Best wishes,

Stewart McCoy.


----- Original Message -----
From: "Jon Murphy" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
To: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Sent: Wednesday, September 22, 2004 6:02 AM
Subject: A tool for adjustments

For those of you who either make lutes, or adjust your own lutes,
I've just
found a good tool for working on the grooves in the nut. I had been
using
the little 4" Swedish craftsman's files, and some on this list have
suggested strings coated with an abasive.

----- Original Message -----
From: "Jon Murphy" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
To: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>; "Antonio Corona" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Sent: Wednesday, September 22, 2004 4:58 AM
Subject: Re: vihuela vs guitar


> Antonio,
>
> With Vance I thank you for the description (and the drawings I've
seen
> confirm them).
>
> But if you will forgive me for correcting your English (and I only
do so as
> I prefer to be corrected when I speak in another language). I
don't think
> you mean "polemic" when describing the vihuela. Polemic means
"aggressive"
> or "attacking", and can be used as a noun (as in "a polemic") or
as an
> adjective (as "a polemic speech" - sometimes misused as "a
polemical
> speech"). You might mean "generic", as in a word that refers to a
class of
> things - or you might mean something else (but your meaning is
clear from
> the context).

> Best, Jon




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