Hi,

Andreas Nilsson wrote:
Well Dave, it seems I suck aswell, because I uploaded the wrong file. Try again now, it should work this time.

Better :) I know I'm being finnicky, but do you think you could change "its developers don't want anything back" to "its developers don't want anything in return"? I think it sounds just a smidgin better.

And "make your everyday life better" to "make your life any better", maybe?

Cheers,
Dave.


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