On 25 Sep 2011, at 21:49, Christoph Noack wrote: > > > Please check whether the banners are okay - marketing-wise. For > feedback, please use either the marketing list (reply to this mail) or > the design list. Since these banner closely follow our branding language > (see later), I suggest to replace the older proposals with these new > ones. So, please tell us whether everything fits (size, format, > claim, ...) ... or not ;-) Comments appreciated...
These are good work - thanks, See. Personally, I would change the order of the words. I would write: Power-packed personal productivity suite Free, libre and open source for Windows, Macintosh and GNU/Linux That makes the core descriptive text together and makes it strongly alliterative, puts the differentiating values on their own line and means that each line has a distinctive purpose. Cheers, S. -- Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to marketing+h...@global.libreoffice.org Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted
