> -----Original Message----- > From: Jörg Schmidt [mailto:joe...@j-m-schmidt.de] > Sent: Friday, November 02, 2012 3:46 PM > To: ooo-dev@incubator.apache.org > Subject: Re: another XML file for the Consultants-Page > > > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Rob Weir [mailto:robw...@apache.org] > > Sent: Friday, November 02, 2012 2:59 PM > > To: ooo-dev@incubator.apache.org > > Subject: Re: another XML file for the Consultants-Page > > > > On Thu, Nov 1, 2012 at 12:47 PM, Jörg Schmidt > > <joe...@j-m-schmidt.de> wrote: > > > Hello, > > > > > > here is another XML file for an entry in: > > > http://www.openoffice.org/bizdev/consultants.html > > > > > > Can someone please check and then add? > > > > > > > If there are no objections I'll add to the XML and generate a > > new HTML. > > > > But if you are in contact with this party, you might > suggest that they > > add an OpenOffice-specific page to their website, so we can point to > > that. Or mention OpenOffice on the existing page. This would help > > any visitors from our website, since it is safe to assume that they > > are interested specifically in OpenOffice services. > > I assume you mean the formulation: > > "Helping small business customers since > many years in using and optimizing IT solutions. This is done > by careful requirements analysis, migration support, > professional project management and continuous user support > based on individual agreements." > > is specific enough?
The correct formulation is naturally: I assume you mean the formulation [...] is *not* specific enough? Jörg
