Re: PAW - The Shoes in Marilyn's Garden (A different Perspective)

[Gonz]

Very interesting.  My eyes are drawn to the odd assortment to the right, 
I'm trying to find some meaning in them.  Is is random, or intentional? 
 I don't know.  The shot has become more interesting, but I want more, 
there has to be more, given the story you gave us behind it.  Where is 
the garden?  Is it behind the wall or in front of it?  The details and 
tonality are outstanding, but the story needs to go beyond the mystery. 
 Or do you want to keep it a mystery?  I want to know whats behind.

Thanks,
rg
[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
Thanks for the honest comments.  Really appreciate 'em.
I did take make another shot: 

http://home.earthlink.net/~sbelinkoff/paw/shoes04.html 

which shows more context. I'll say no more <LOL>
Shel 

 Subject: Re: PAW - The Shoes in Marilyn's Garden
Too tight, left & right edges over-cropped.  No sense of context.  Good 
tonality though, excellent detail. But the comp is wrong, sorry, but 
doesn't live up to a shelbel.

http://home.earthlink.net/~sbelinkoff/paw/shoes.html