Hi Boris, Honest and brutal, but also very (!) subjective this time.
I love this kind of shots. It pulls you in. However, there are a few things that distracts from the effect, imo. The highlights become little doodles and introduce a bit of dizziness. I find that a bit... um... dunno if it's the right word, but I'll try disconcerting. Hope you understand what I think about. I've also seen this done with a lot more of the doodling effect, and that too can be cool. As it stands, I perceive it as not enough and too much. Also, I think the pic would be better without the halo of the photographer in the glass. I'm not going to suggest using a tripod. Rather, I'd suggest you lean the front of the lens towards the window pane. This will both give you better support, less reflections, and minimise the blurring effect of the window glass on the motif beyond as much as possible. Cheers, Jostein Quoting Boris Liberman <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>: > Hi! > > I am starting to realize that most of my photography is very static. > Here I've tried to be slightly less static... > > http://not.contaxg.com/document.php?id=12495 > > Your honest and brutal feedback is as usual sought after and appreciated. > > Boris > > ---------------------------------------------------------------- This message was sent using IMP, the Internet Messaging Program.
