Bug#760900: tagged as pending
On 2014-09-13 23:20, Dmitry Smirnov wrote: On Sat, 13 Sep 2014 13:57:36 Filipus Klutiero wrote: Thanks. There is an issue left in into logicalone (teamdev)||. The noun phrase is missing a determiner. This could read into a single logical one, but logical one is at best unclear. I'd suggest into a single virtual NIC. Thanks, I hope it is better now: http://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/collab-maint/libteam.git/diff/?id=aa5e280ba53d84d9eb547c0060abada42abb523d It is, thank you. I notice an issue in the following sentence: | This is already implemented in the Linux kernel by the bonding driver but unlike bonding driver libteam (user space) have the following additional features| The noun phrase bonding driver is missing a determiner such as the (this could read unlike the bonding driver). Also, I would recommend adding a comma after that. -- Filipus Klutiero http://www.philippecloutier.com
Bug#760900: tagged as pending
On Thu, 11 Sep 2014 20:12:27 Filipus Klutiero wrote: Thank you. One more issue persists: Libteam provides mechanism to team multiple NICs (ports) into logical one (teamdev) at OSI Layer 2 (Data link). provides mechanism is incorrect. mechanism is missing a determiner, such as a (the sentence could alternatively read Libteam allows several NICs (ports) to be grouped into a single logical NIC [...]). Thanks, updated as advised: http://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/collab-maint/libteam.git/commit/?id=ab95564b6214336007431051da104fce0dc66051 By the way, I have never heard about channel teaming. Wikipedia however mentions NIC teaming. Words of upstream from description on home page: http://libteam.org/ I'm not sure where term channel teaming is used... -- Best wishes, Dmitry Smirnov. --- Much of humankind's intellectual and emotional struggle has been not for truth, but against truth. The advance of science has been sporadically fought against for thousands of years. -- C. W. Dalton, The Right Brain and Religion signature.asc Description: This is a digitally signed message part.
Bug#760900: tagged as pending
On 2014-09-13 02:39, Dmitry Smirnov wrote: On Thu, 11 Sep 2014 20:12:27 Filipus Klutiero wrote: Thank you. One more issue persists: Libteam provides mechanism to team multiple NICs (ports) into logical one (teamdev) at OSI Layer 2 (Data link). provides mechanism is incorrect. mechanism is missing a determiner, such as a (the sentence could alternatively read Libteam allows several NICs (ports) to be grouped into a single logical NIC [...]). Thanks, updated as advised: http://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/collab-maint/libteam.git/commit/?id=ab95564b6214336007431051da104fce0dc66051 Thanks. There is an issue left in into logicalone (teamdev)||. The noun phrase is missing a determiner. This could read into a single logical one, but logical one is at best unclear. I'd suggest into a single virtual NIC. [...] -- Filipus Klutiero http://www.philippecloutier.com
Bug#760900: tagged as pending
On Sat, 13 Sep 2014 13:57:36 Filipus Klutiero wrote: Thanks. There is an issue left in into logicalone (teamdev)||. The noun phrase is missing a determiner. This could read into a single logical one, but logical one is at best unclear. I'd suggest into a single virtual NIC. Thanks, I hope it is better now: http://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/collab-maint/libteam.git/diff/?id=aa5e280ba53d84d9eb547c0060abada42abb523d -- All the best, Dmitry Smirnov. --- It is impossible to imagine Goethe or Beethoven being good at billiards or golf. -- H. L. Mencken signature.asc Description: This is a digitally signed message part.
Bug#760900: tagged as pending
On 2014-09-09 01:44, Dmitry Smirnov wrote: tag 760900 pending -- We believe that the bug #760900 you reported has been fixed in the Git repository. You can see the commit message below and/or inspect the commit contents at: http://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/collab-maint/libteam.git/diff/?id=0d58638 (This message was generated automatically by 'git-post-receive-tag-pending-commitmsg' hook). --- commit 0d58638 (HEAD, master) Author: Dmitry Smirnov only...@member.fsf.org Date: Tue Sep 9 05:40:41 2014 Improve long description (Closes: #760900). Thanks, Filipus Klutiero. Thank you. One more issue persists: Libteam provides mechanism to team multiple NICs (ports) into logical one (teamdev) at OSI Layer 2 (Data link). provides mechanism is incorrect. mechanism is missing a determiner, such as a (the sentence could alternatively read Libteam allows several NICs (ports) to be grouped into a single logical NIC [...]). By the way, I have never heard about channel teaming. Wikipedia however mentions NIC teaming. -- Filipus Klutiero http://www.philippecloutier.com -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-bugs-dist-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of unsubscribe. Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org
