Re: PESO - Susquehenna

2006-07-20 Thread Scott Loveless
Thanks, Bruce.  I took a few exposures of this scene and one of them
does not include the left bank.  I actually like having a bit of the
left bank in the scene.  I do agree with your assessment of the sky
and will try to crop it out soon.

Thanks for looking and commenting.  Much appreciated.

On 7/19/06, Bruce Dayton [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
 Hello Scott,

 I mostly like it.  The issues can be most dealt with in a crop.  I
 find the left bank to be of no value to the picture, and the left side
 of the sky kind of hazes out.  So I would crop the left side off.
 Also the sky is not really very strong and doesn't need that much
 showing.  So I would crop some off the top.  I tried it here and feel
 the picture is much stronger that way.

 I like the angle and colors that you have portrayed here - a little
 more work on the image and it could be quite good.

 --
 Bruce


 Wednesday, July 19, 2006, 9:42:19 AM, you wrote:

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Re: PESO - Susquehenna

2006-07-20 Thread Scott Loveless
I don't necessarily disagree, Jack.  I'll give it a shot over the next
day or so and see.  Thanks so much for the comments.

On 7/19/06, Jack Davis [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
 Like it. Can imagine the scene in the Fall with placid river
 reflections.
 While I like seeing all of the far right tree, I'd probably wind up
 either cropping off or cloning out the rather bright building.
 Thanks for the peek.

 Jack

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  Fuji Superia 800.  This is one of my first few photos with a
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Re: PESO - Susquehenna

2006-07-20 Thread Scott Loveless
Thanks, Paul.  I like the left bank, too.  See my reply to Bruce.

Thanks, again!

On 7/19/06, [EMAIL PROTECTED] [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
 I like this. Peaceful and pleasant. I wouldn't crop out the left bank. It 
 establishes that this is a river, rather than just the shore of a lake or 
 pond. I would burn in the sky on the left side of frame, and I would crop a 
 little off the top as Bruce suggested below.
 Paul
  -- Original message --
 From: Bruce Dayton [EMAIL PROTECTED]
  Hello Scott,
 
  I mostly like it.  The issues can be most dealt with in a crop.  I
  find the left bank to be of no value to the picture, and the left side
  of the sky kind of hazes out.  So I would crop the left side off.
  Also the sky is not really very strong and doesn't need that much
  showing.  So I would crop some off the top.  I tried it here and feel
  the picture is much stronger that way.
 
  I like the angle and colors that you have portrayed here - a little
  more work on the image and it could be quite good.
 
  --
  Bruce
 
 
  Wednesday, July 19, 2006, 9:42:19 AM, you wrote:
 
  SL 
  http://picasaweb.google.com/sdloveless/July2006/photo#4953492787365543954
 
  SL Taken from a bridge near Jersey Shore, PA.  PZ-1, 28-80 power zoom,
  SL Fuji Superia 800.  This is one of my first few photos with a
  SL polarizer.  All comments and critiques are greatly appreciated.
 
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Re: PESO - Susquehenna

2006-07-20 Thread Scott Loveless
Thanks, Ken.  I'll bring mine along next time and have the wife paddle
out into the middle.  g

On 7/19/06, Kenneth Waller [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
 Scott, it leaves me asking is that all?
 I'm expecting more but its not there.
 Needs a red canoe or such.

 Kenneth Waller


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 From: Scott Loveless [EMAIL PROTECTED]
 Subject: PESO - Susquehenna


  http://picasaweb.google.com/sdloveless/July2006/photo#4953492787365543954
 
  Taken from a bridge near Jersey Shore, PA.  PZ-1, 28-80 power zoom,
  Fuji Superia 800.  This is one of my first few photos with a
  polarizer.  All comments and critiques are greatly appreciated.
 
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Re: PESO - Susquehenna

2006-07-20 Thread Scott Loveless
Thanks, Frank!  Glad you like it.

On 7/19/06, frank theriault [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
 On 7/19/06, Scott Loveless [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
  http://picasaweb.google.com/sdloveless/July2006/photo#4953492787365543954
 
  Taken from a bridge near Jersey Shore, PA.  PZ-1, 28-80 power zoom,
  Fuji Superia 800.  This is one of my first few photos with a
  polarizer.  All comments and critiques are greatly appreciated.

 That's beautiful, Scott.

 cheers,
 frank


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Re: PESO - Susquehenna

2006-07-20 Thread Rick Womer
I like it, Scott, and I wouldn't change anything.  The
curve of the river interacts nicely with the shore and
the far hills.

Numbers 2 and 3 of this on-line collection are really
nice, too.

This is the PESO maiden voyage of the PZ-1, isn't
it?

Rick

--- Jack Davis [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

 Like it. Can imagine the scene in the Fall with
 placid river
 reflections.
 While I like seeing all of the far right tree, I'd
 probably wind up
 either cropping off or cloning out the rather bright
 building.
 Thanks for the peek.
 
 Jack
 
 --- Scott Loveless [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
 
 

http://picasaweb.google.com/sdloveless/July2006/photo#4953492787365543954
  
  Taken from a bridge near Jersey Shore, PA.  PZ-1,
 28-80 power zoom,
  Fuji Superia 800.  This is one of my first few
 photos with a
  polarizer.  All comments and critiques are greatly
 appreciated.
  
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Re: PESO - Susquehenna

2006-07-20 Thread Eactivist
In a message dated 7/19/2006 12:44:09 PM Pacific Daylight Time, 
[EMAIL PROTECTED] writes:
Scott, it leaves me asking is that all?
I'm expecting more but its not there.
Needs a red canoe or such.

Kenneth Waller
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Agreed.

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PESO - Susquehenna

2006-07-19 Thread Scott Loveless
http://picasaweb.google.com/sdloveless/July2006/photo#4953492787365543954

Taken from a bridge near Jersey Shore, PA.  PZ-1, 28-80 power zoom,
Fuji Superia 800.  This is one of my first few photos with a
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Re: PESO - Susquehenna

2006-07-19 Thread Jack Davis
Like it. Can imagine the scene in the Fall with placid river
reflections.
While I like seeing all of the far right tree, I'd probably wind up
either cropping off or cloning out the rather bright building.
Thanks for the peek.

Jack

--- Scott Loveless [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:


http://picasaweb.google.com/sdloveless/July2006/photo#4953492787365543954
 
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 Fuji Superia 800.  This is one of my first few photos with a
 polarizer.  All comments and critiques are greatly appreciated.
 
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Re: PESO - Susquehenna

2006-07-19 Thread Bruce Dayton
Hello Scott,

I mostly like it.  The issues can be most dealt with in a crop.  I
find the left bank to be of no value to the picture, and the left side
of the sky kind of hazes out.  So I would crop the left side off.
Also the sky is not really very strong and doesn't need that much
showing.  So I would crop some off the top.  I tried it here and feel
the picture is much stronger that way.

I like the angle and colors that you have portrayed here - a little
more work on the image and it could be quite good.

-- 
Bruce


Wednesday, July 19, 2006, 9:42:19 AM, you wrote:

SL http://picasaweb.google.com/sdloveless/July2006/photo#4953492787365543954

SL Taken from a bridge near Jersey Shore, PA.  PZ-1, 28-80 power zoom,
SL Fuji Superia 800.  This is one of my first few photos with a
SL polarizer.  All comments and critiques are greatly appreciated.

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Re: PESO - Susquehenna

2006-07-19 Thread frank theriault
On 7/19/06, Scott Loveless [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
 http://picasaweb.google.com/sdloveless/July2006/photo#4953492787365543954

 Taken from a bridge near Jersey Shore, PA.  PZ-1, 28-80 power zoom,
 Fuji Superia 800.  This is one of my first few photos with a
 polarizer.  All comments and critiques are greatly appreciated.

That's beautiful, Scott.

cheers,
frank


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Re: PESO - Susquehenna

2006-07-19 Thread pnstenquist
I like this. Peaceful and pleasant. I wouldn't crop out the left bank. It 
establishes that this is a river, rather than just the shore of a lake or pond. 
I would burn in the sky on the left side of frame, and I would crop a little 
off the top as Bruce suggested below.
Paul
 -- Original message --
From: Bruce Dayton [EMAIL PROTECTED]
 Hello Scott,
 
 I mostly like it.  The issues can be most dealt with in a crop.  I
 find the left bank to be of no value to the picture, and the left side
 of the sky kind of hazes out.  So I would crop the left side off.
 Also the sky is not really very strong and doesn't need that much
 showing.  So I would crop some off the top.  I tried it here and feel
 the picture is much stronger that way.
 
 I like the angle and colors that you have portrayed here - a little
 more work on the image and it could be quite good.
 
 -- 
 Bruce
 
 
 Wednesday, July 19, 2006, 9:42:19 AM, you wrote:
 
 SL http://picasaweb.google.com/sdloveless/July2006/photo#4953492787365543954
 
 SL Taken from a bridge near Jersey Shore, PA.  PZ-1, 28-80 power zoom,
 SL Fuji Superia 800.  This is one of my first few photos with a
 SL polarizer.  All comments and critiques are greatly appreciated.
 
 SL -- 
 SL Scott Loveless
 SL http://www.twosixteen.com
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Re: PESO - Susquehenna

2006-07-19 Thread Kenneth Waller
Scott, it leaves me asking is that all?
I'm expecting more but its not there.
Needs a red canoe or such.

Kenneth Waller


- Original Message - 
From: Scott Loveless [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Subject: PESO - Susquehenna


 http://picasaweb.google.com/sdloveless/July2006/photo#4953492787365543954
 
 Taken from a bridge near Jersey Shore, PA.  PZ-1, 28-80 power zoom,
 Fuji Superia 800.  This is one of my first few photos with a
 polarizer.  All comments and critiques are greatly appreciated.
 
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