Hi Gorry,
See http://www.phelan-4.com/dccp/simul-open-06-tp-comments.pdf for
suggested text changes, questions and comments. Changes from your -06
are in red, with deletions in balloons. Accept what you think is good
and we can discuss the rest :-).
Tom P.
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From:
Thanks Tom,
I will read and update the draft, and get back on any comments that I
can't see how to easily implement.
Gorry
Phelan, Tom wrote:
Hi Gorry,
See http://www.phelan-4.com/dccp/simul-open-06-tp-comments.pdf for
suggested text changes, questions and comments. Changes from your -06
