Re: Adaptive Public License review

2004-04-22 Thread Carmen Leeming
John, thank you for taking the time to review the entire license.  My 
responses to your comments/suggestions are embedded below:

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Though the APL is MPL-ish in nature, it has a few provisions modeled after
the GPL, but intensified in such a way that I believe they violate OSD #1.
In particular, Section 3.2 requires that any distribution of Executable
code charge no more than the distribution cost.  This means that binary
packages of the APLed work can't be put on CD-ROMs that are sold above
cost, as most distro makers do.  We have held in the past that this sort
of thing makes a license not open source.
Section 3.3(b) makes the same requirement, but only in respect of source
code distributed separately from Executable code.  The GPL also makes
this restriction, and it is a reasonable one: it prevents people from
freely distributing the Executable form and holding the source for ransom.
(This could only happen in practice in the case of a Subsequent Work.)
 

The intention of Section 3.2 was to require the Free Redistribution of 
the executable.  After reviewing the wording of this section, I can see 
that it violates OSD #1.  I can remove a portion of the offending line 
to make it conform:

A Distributor may choose to distribute the Licensed Work, or any 
portion thereof, in Executable form (an EXECUTABLE DISTRIBUTION) to 
any third party, under the terms of Section 2 of this License, provided 
the Executable Distribution is made available under and accompanied by a 
copy of this License ***and is distributed at no more than the cost of 
physically performing Executable Distribution***, AND provided at least 
ONE of the following conditions is fulfilled:

(section between '***' marks to be removed)

LESSER POINTS:

The license should make clear that CD and DVD distribution count as
Electronic Distribution, though they are not performed over a wire.
 

We used the same definition of Electronic Distribution Mechanism as used 
in the MPL.  Specifically mentioning CDs and DVDs as Electronic 
Distribution Mechanisms leaves out other valid current methods, as well 
as future methods that may become standard.  I'm open to changing this, 
but would invite other comments on how specific we want to get with this 
definition.

The requirement to make the source of Subsequent Works available for
three full years in all cases except internal deployment is burdensome.
 

This clause (3.1a) was to promote the continued availablity of the 
Subsequent Works, but we could reduce the time-frame if it is too 
burdensome.  What time would you suggest as reasonable?

CONCLUSION:

If the offending language in Section 3.2 is removed, the AFL should be
passed as an open source license.
 

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Re: Adaptive Public License review

2004-04-22 Thread jcowan
Carmen Leeming scripsit:

 A Distributor may choose to distribute the Licensed Work, or any 
 portion thereof, in Executable form (an EXECUTABLE DISTRIBUTION) to 
 any third party, under the terms of Section 2 of this License, provided 
 the Executable Distribution is made available under and accompanied by a 
 copy of this License ***and is distributed at no more than the cost of 
 physically performing Executable Distribution***, AND provided at least 
 ONE of the following conditions is fulfilled:
 
 (section between '***' marks to be removed)

Excellent.

 We used the same definition of Electronic Distribution Mechanism as used 
 in the MPL.  Specifically mentioning CDs and DVDs as Electronic 
 Distribution Mechanisms leaves out other valid current methods, as well 
 as future methods that may become standard.  I'm open to changing this, 
 but would invite other comments on how specific we want to get with this 
 definition.

I suggest something like including, but not limited to, distribution by
FTP, HTTP, CD, or DVD.  The phrase including, but not limited to is
very useful, as it provides examples without constraining implementation.

 The requirement to make the source of Subsequent Works available for
 three full years in all cases except internal deployment is burdensome.
 
 This clause (3.1a) was to promote the continued availablity of the 
 Subsequent Works, but we could reduce the time-frame if it is too 
 burdensome.  What time would you suggest as reasonable?

In fact, I am not thrilled with the whole idea of compelled publication of
Subsequent Works at all: it means, for example, that I can't make changes
to the source of an APLed application and then email the source to a
friend of mine without also publishing the source on a Web site.
Indeed, if it weren't for the internal-deployment provision, I would
argue that compelling publication makes the license not open source.

I don't know if you care about the FSF's certifying
the APL as a free software license: historically, they
have considered compelled-publication licenses unfree.  See
http://www.gnu.org/licenses/license-list.html#NonFreeSoftwareLicense .

The redline PDF at http://www.opensource.apple.com/apsl/2.0-redline.pdf
shows how the GPL rule was added to the 2.0 version of the APSL,
allowing either full publication or source-follows-executable rules.
Both this and the earlier 1.2 version of the APSL use 12 months rather
than 36 as the maximum required publication period.

IMHO the GPL's rule that source must accompany (or follow) executable
is really enough.  But this is a topic on which reasonable persons
can differ.

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