Re: Doc: improve documentation of Bézier curves (2858) (issue 6561064)

2012-10-09 Thread tdanielsmusic
On 2012/10/09 05:44:52, J_lowe wrote: Are there too many 'subs' here? No. This is the standard level 5 heading. See http://www.lilypond.org/doc/v2.17/Documentation/contributor/sectioning-commands I only mention it because the headings are bold _italic_ which really jars on the eye when

Re: Doc: improve documentation of Bézier curves (2858) (issue 6561064)

2012-10-08 Thread tdanielsmusic
http://codereview.appspot.com/6561064/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely File Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/6561064/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely#newcode3961

Re: Doc: improve documentation of Bézier curves (2858) (issue 6561064)

2012-10-08 Thread k-ohara5a5a
http://codereview.appspot.com/6561064/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely File Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/6561064/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely#newcode4087

Re: Doc: improve documentation of Bézier curves (2858) (issue 6561064)

2012-10-08 Thread tdanielsmusic
On 2012/10/08 07:46:09, Keith wrote: Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely:4087: -\tweak #'control-points #'((-2 . 3) (-1 . 3.1) (0 . 3.2) (1 . 2.4)) ( ) g2( ) f is the same as g2( f) so any implication that the does something different might mislead. They are, of course,

Re: Doc: improve documentation of Bézier curves (2858) (issue 6561064)

2012-10-08 Thread graham
LGTM https://codereview.appspot.com/6561064/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely File Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely (right): https://codereview.appspot.com/6561064/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely#newcode3901

Re: Doc: improve documentation of Bézier curves (2858) (issue 6561064)

2012-10-08 Thread janek . lilypond
http://codereview.appspot.com/6561064/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely File Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/6561064/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely#newcode3961

Re: Doc: improve documentation of Bézier curves (2858) (issue 6561064)

2012-10-08 Thread tdanielsmusic
On 2012/10/08 20:04:21, Graham Percival wrote: LGTM Thanks! Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely:3901: @itemize technically this would be better as an @enumerate a, but this isn't a big deal. Ah yes, I'd forgotten that. I'll change it in the next patch set, since I have to

Re: Doc: improve documentation of Bézier curves (2858) (issue 6561064)

2012-10-08 Thread pkx166h
http://codereview.appspot.com/6561064/diff/17001/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely File Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/6561064/diff/17001/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely#newcode3916

Re: Doc: improve documentation of Bézier curves (2858) (issue 6561064)

2012-10-07 Thread tdanielsmusic
On 2012/10/07 03:14:31, david.nalesnik wrote: This looks great to me. I like the reordering, and I think the explanations are very clear. I've tweaked the curves a little in the examples (do what you like with my suggestions!), Thanks. I've adopted them, but with just a little further

Re: Doc: improve documentation of Bézier curves (2858) (issue 6561064)

2012-10-07 Thread david . nalesnik
LGTM. And thanks again for doing this! -David https://codereview.appspot.com/6561064/ ___ lilypond-devel mailing list lilypond-devel@gnu.org https://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/lilypond-devel

Re: Doc: improve documentation of Bézier curves (2858) (issue 6561064)

2012-10-07 Thread janek . lilypond
LGTM http://codereview.appspot.com/6561064/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely File Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely (right): http://codereview.appspot.com/6561064/diff/10001/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely#newcode3961

Re: Doc: improve documentation of Bézier curves (2858) (issue 6561064)

2012-10-06 Thread david . nalesnik
Trevor-- This looks great to me. I like the reordering, and I think the explanations are very clear. I've tweaked the curves a little in the examples (do what you like with my suggestions!), but otherwise: LGTM.

Doc: improve documentation of Bézier curves (2858) (issue 6561064)

2012-09-28 Thread k-ohara5a5a
Maybe just dump the waste of time that was \override 'control-points http://codereview.appspot.com/6561064/diff/1/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely File Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely (right):

Re: Doc: improve documentation of Bézier curves (2858) (issue 6561064)

2012-09-28 Thread david . nalesnik
Trevor-- Thank you so much for taking this on! I've been pecking at documenting this for awhile, but got hung up on finding the perfect examples... What you have is clearer than what I cam up with. https://codereview.appspot.com/6561064/diff/1/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely