Hey I went through your storyboard! Here is my feedback: 1) Why do you have an initial spark that disappears and then reappears? Is that some kind of attention grabber?
2) I'm not sure I understand what "frog perspective" means? So you have shiny pieces coming from the initial spark and then they fall against the camera? The rest seems okay from my perspective.. but I'm dubious about the intro. On Tue, May 21, 2013 at 1:24 PM, Bastian Hougaard <gn...@rvzt.net> wrote: > Hello! > > I am working on a promotional video for GNOME and I am looking for some > feedback. The goal of the video is to provide information about what > GNOME is, why the target group should try GNOME and encourage the target > group to try GNOME. Further details can be found here: > https://live.gnome.org/BastianIls%C3%B8/PromotionalVideos/NewUsersV2 > > I have attached a storyboard to this e-mail showing my proposal as to > how we can to accomplish the above stated. The link to the source files > can be found here: > http://rvzt.net/Temp/Animatic.tar.gz > > Feedback is very welcome! > > Thank you very much on beforehand, > > Bastian > > > > -- > marketing-list mailing list > marketing-list@gnome.org > https://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing-list > >
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