On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 11:39 -0300, Gonzalo Odiard wrote:
Iain, Sean, Sam,
_Please_consolidate_the_changes_before_send_to_Peter_.
Thanks, Gonzalo, is good advice.
My apologies to the other contributors, Sam, Walter and Sean for
clouding their perfectly useful work.
The text that I have
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 8:01 PM, Sean DALY sdaly...@gmail.com wrote:
Peter - here is Iain's document:
http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/marketing/attachments/20150519/bdaf00ca/attachment.html
Can we have pure plain text, the web team deals with formatting.
I need to be able to provide it in
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 8:33 PM, Iain Brown Douglas
i...@browndouglas.plus.com wrote:
On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 19:57 +0200, Sean DALY wrote:
Gonzalo - Iain had already consolidated all changes
... almost consolidated!
Chat does not really fit in Multimedia, IMHO.
It's not in Multimedia, it's
On Wed, May 20, 2015 at 10:33 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
i...@browndouglas.plus.com wrote:
On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 11:39 -0300, Gonzalo Odiard wrote:
Iain, Sean, Sam,
_Please_consolidate_the_changes_before_send_to_Peter_.
Thanks, Gonzalo, is good advice.
I've just spent two hours manually
Thanks Peter, I was watching that too.
If I understand correctly switching/changing the sections or adding an
Activity is beyond tweaks? while text changes are tweaks.
I'm quite happy with it, even though there are lots of changes we suggested
which aren't in.
I feel the only tweak still to
_Please_consolidate_the_changes_before_send_to_Peter_.
Thanks, Gonzalo, is good advice.
I've just spent two hours manually providing updates. It will be live
on staging shortly.
Please provide any further updates against that.
Right the new updated content is live on staging. Please
On Wed, May 20, 2015 at 2:52 PM, Sean DALY sdaly...@gmail.com wrote:
Thanks Peter, I was watching that too.
If I understand correctly switching/changing the sections or adding an
Activity is beyond tweaks? while text changes are tweaks.
We need to stop somewhere and say Yes, this is good
Many thanks Iain
Fine with me to delete Multimedia section. I feel the existing intro plus
the Activities descriptions will fulfill the role of encouraging the
visitor to download and try SoaS. Walter, Sam, OK with you?
Sean
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 6:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
i...@browndouglas.plus.com wrote:
Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
Fair copy attached.
I originally included the section Multimedia, as it is the set of
Activities in http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/
but not in the
Hi Peter,
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson pbrobin...@gmail.com wrote:
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
i...@browndouglas.plus.com wrote:
Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
Fair copy attached.
I originally included the section Multimedia, as
Hi Peter,
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson pbrobin...@gmail.com
wrote:
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
i...@browndouglas.plus.com wrote:
Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
Fair copy attached.
I originally included the
On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 13:30 +0100, Peter Robinson wrote:
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 12:37 PM, Sam P. sam.parkins...@gmail.com wrote:
Hi Peter,
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson pbrobin...@gmail.com wrote:
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 12:37 PM, Sam P. sam.parkins...@gmail.com wrote:
Hi Peter,
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson pbrobin...@gmail.com wrote:
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
i...@browndouglas.plus.com wrote:
Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 15:00 +0100, Peter Robinson wrote:
Hi Peter,
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson pbrobin...@gmail.com
wrote:
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
i...@browndouglas.plus.com wrote:
Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 3:16 PM, Iain Brown Douglas
i...@browndouglas.plus.com wrote:
On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 15:00 +0100, Peter Robinson wrote:
Hi Peter,
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson pbrobin...@gmail.com
wrote:
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown
Iain, Sean, Sam,
_Please_consolidate_the_changes_before_send_to_Peter_.
Peter,
when need this be finished?
Gonzalo
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 11:34 AM, Peter Robinson pbrobin...@gmail.com
wrote:
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 3:16 PM, Iain Brown Douglas
i...@browndouglas.plus.com wrote:
On Tue,
Gonzalo - Iain had already consolidated all changes but Peter doesn't want
to deal with a text file.
Sean
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 4:39 PM, Gonzalo Odiard godi...@sugarlabs.org
wrote:
Iain, Sean, Sam,
_Please_consolidate_the_changes_before_send_to_Peter_.
Peter,
when need this be finished?
Peter - here is Iain's document:
http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/marketing/attachments/20150519/bdaf00ca/attachment.html
Sean
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 7:57 PM, Sean DALY sdaly...@gmail.com wrote:
Gonzalo - Iain had already consolidated all changes but Peter doesn't want
to deal with a
On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 19:57 +0200, Sean DALY wrote:
Gonzalo - Iain had already consolidated all changes
... almost consolidated!
Chat does not really fit in Multimedia, IMHO.
Iain
but Peter doesn't want to deal with a text file.
Sean
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 4:39 PM, Gonzalo Odiard
Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
Fair copy attached.
I originally included the section Multimedia, as it is the set of
Activities in http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/
but not in the Walter/Sam contribution.
I think it is the weakest section. Chat jars a bit on the page, as
thanks Iain looks good
some typos:
Wwork - Work
FotoToon - OK is singular not plural
speech and though - speech and thought
Paint provides to tools - Paint provides tools
Make Sugar activities - Make Sugar Activities / edit existing activities
- edit existing Activities / Browse activity - Browse
On Sun, 2015-05-17 at 15:14 +0200, Sean DALY wrote:
Peter - Walter's edits were for the Activities descriptions, mine were
for the introduction, no reconciliation necessary
Sean
On Sat, May 16, 2015 at 12:38 PM, Peter Robinson
pbrobin...@gmail.com wrote:
Walter sent some
Peter - Walter's edits were for the Activities descriptions, mine were for
the introduction, no reconciliation necessary
Sean
On Sat, May 16, 2015 at 12:38 PM, Peter Robinson pbrobin...@gmail.com
wrote:
Walter sent some edits, I believe most of those have gone in, we need
to update titles
Peter - are the intro edits I sent going in?
thanks
Sean
On Fri, May 15, 2015 at 3:00 PM, Peter Robinson pbrobin...@gmail.com
wrote:
It's already in process
On Fri, May 15, 2015 at 1:02 PM, Sam P. sam.parkins...@gmail.com wrote:
Hi Peter,
I think Walter send out a good copy [1] with
Walter sent some edits, I believe most of those have gone in, we need
to update titles still I believe.
This is what we currently have, the Activities list and layout are now set.
http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/
We can tweak the text but I need to have the edits co-ordinated, I
Looks great. FWIW, I had done some editing of Sam's text, included below.
Understanding and creating content
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* Write. Make a story, poem, report or anything with write. Use
formatting tools to add images or colors. Work together with friends to
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