Author: gjb
Date: Wed Sep  3 16:46:37 2014
New Revision: 271037
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/271037

Log:
  Minor rewording to the r260385 entry.
  
  Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation

Modified:
  stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml

Modified: stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml  Wed Sep  3 
16:46:35 2014        (r271036)
+++ stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml  Wed Sep  3 
16:46:37 2014        (r271037)
@@ -588,10 +588,10 @@
        <para revision="260385" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">The
          &man.geom.4; subsystem has been updated to support I/O
          direct dispatch.  When safety requirements are met, it
-         allows to avoid passing I/O requests to GEOM
+         enables avoiding passing I/O requests to GEOM
          <literal>g_up</literal>/<literal>g_down</literal> thread,
-         executing them directly in the caller context.  That allows
-         to avoid CPU bottlenecks in
+         executing them directly in the caller context, avoiding
+         CPU bottlenecks in
          <literal>g_up</literal>/<literal>g_down</literal> threads,
          plus avoid several context switches per I/O.</para>
 
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