Author: gjb
Date: Wed Sep  3 16:48:33 2014
New Revision: 271042
URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/271042

Log:
  Minor rewording to the r260387 entry.
  
  Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation

Modified:
  stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml

Modified: stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml  Wed Sep  3 
16:46:45 2014        (r271041)
+++ stable/10/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml  Wed Sep  3 
16:48:33 2014        (r271042)
@@ -601,9 +601,9 @@
 
        <para revision="260387" contrib="sponsor" sponsor="&ix;">The
          &man.cam.4; subsystem has been updated to support
-         finer-grained locking, direct dispatch and multi-queue.
-         Combined with &man.geom.4; direct dispatch that allows to
-         reduce lock congestion and improve <acronym>SMP</acronym>
+         finer-grained locking, direct dispatch and multi-queue,
+         which combined with &man.geom.4; direct dispatch, reduces
+         lock congestion and improves <acronym>SMP</acronym>
          scalability of the SCSI/ATA stack.</para>
 
        <para revision="260478">The &man.geom.8;
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