Hi, Here is the preliminary shperherding document for -sign- It is complete through revision -19-, and -20- should become available this week so I can finalize. Comments welcome.
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Shepherding document for syslog-sign (1.a) Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Has the Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version of the document and, in particular, does he or she believe this version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for publication? David Harrington <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> I believe that this version is ready for publication. (1.b) Has the document had adequate review both from key WG members and from key non-WG members? Does the Document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed? The document has been reviewed by the Working Group and by people outside of the Working Group. There are no concerns about the reviews. The recent reviews may be found in the mailing list archive: http://www1.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/syslog/current/msg01209.html http://www1.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/syslog/current/msg01190.html http://www1.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/syslog/current/msg01227.html (1.c) Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document needs more review from a particular or broader perspective, e.g., security, operational complexity, someone familiar with AAA, internationalization or XML No. (1.d) Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or issues with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any event, if those issues have been discussed in the WG and the WG has indicated that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those concerns here. There are no specific concerns. (1.e) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it? The Working Group as a whole understands the document and supports it moving forward. (1.f) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarise the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire will be entered into the ID Tracker.) No appeals have been threatened. (1.g) Has the Document Shepherd verified that the document satisfies all ID nits? (See http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html and http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/). Boilerplate checks are not enough; this check needs to be thorough. [todo] Yes. The document was generated using xml2rfc, has passed automated checking using idnits 1.118 , and passed a manual check of idnits by the shepherd. (1.h) Has the document split its references into normative and informative? Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative references exist, what is the strategy for their completion? Are there normative references that are downward references, as described in [RFC3967]? If so, list these downward references to support the Area Director in the Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967]. The references are split and all referenced documents are RFCs in good standing. This document has informative dependencies upon other draft-ietf-syslog-* internet drafts. These documents are being submitted together. (1.i) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. Recent examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval announcement contains the following sections: Technical Summary Relevant content can frequently be found in the abstract and/or introduction of the document. If not, this may be an indication that there are deficiencies in the abstract or introduction. This document describes a mechanism to add origin authentication, message integrity, replay-resistance, message sequencing, and detection of missing messages to the transmitted syslog messages. This specification draws upon the work defined in RFC xxxx, "The syslog Protocol", however it may be used atop any message delivery mechanism, even that defined in RFC 3164, "The BSD syslog Protocol", or in the RAW mode of "RFC 3195, "The Reliable Delivery of syslog". Working Group Summary Was there anything in WG process that is worth noting? For example, was there controversy about particular points or were there decisions where the consensus was particularly rough? This document has been ready for a very long time. The holdup has been that the Working Group decided to revise draft-ietf-syslog-protocol. This action has been completed. Document Quality Are there existing implementations of the protocol? Have a significant number of vendors indicated their plan to implement the specification? Are there any reviewers that merit special mention as having done a thorough review, e.g., one that resulted in important changes or a conclusion that the document had no substantive issues? There are a number of implementations of syslog-sign available for different operating systems. ===
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